it looks like if this was a game you would be playing Daxter from now on

This was fun. Thanks for the story!

This story's made of pure awesome! :D
Words can't express your greatness for wrighting this (And finishing it!) ;)
Go, you!

This is an interesting twist to the story. I like how you switched their roles and had Jak fall into the Eco rather than Daxter.

OMG! I absolutely loved this story, I can't wait for the next one in the sequel! YOU ARE AN AWSOME WRITER! Please start writing it soon! I will be waiting anxiously! :) ;)

Only just found and read this and I got to say I love it

Woo! Can't wait for the sequel!

Haha too bad you can't stalk metal heads as Dark Jak in the second game! Wow I'm sad that this is coming to an end, but at least there'll be a sequel! I really can not wait to see it! This entire fic was amazing, and I hope to see more from you soon!

Oh boy oh boy! They'll be in for the fight of their lives soon enough! Even though I do wonder how the heck they get the ring all the way back to Sandover, it'll probably take a while. A few weeks, at least. After all, even with an entire month done the villages would still need to clean stuff up, right? Well anyway, congratulations on finishing your first story! I knew you could do it!

That was such a cute and heart-warming ending, thank you for this awesome fic.

Woo good ending to the first part, cant wait for the next one.

Yes. I loved this. Thanks for finishing it.I'm proud of ya bro. I await your future work.

I see no need for more gore, I'm not really a fan of it. Also, don't rush with your chapter, just do it when you feel like it :)

I don't want to sound mean, so please don't take it that way, but, where is the 16th chapter? I've waited was on Thursday night, it wasn't there, the next day, wasn't there still, skipped a few days, & now here I am, & still no chapter! Come on, I'm desperate to see the last chapter & learn what the name of the sequel will be, (or is this the last chapter?) I never really thought to check your page for the sequel. So to recap, where is the last chapter (if there is one), desperate to see how the story ends if this isn't the last chapter, what will sequel's name be,& the fact I forgot to check your page for the sequel's name which is what I will be doing right after I post this review. Love the story by the way, you should be a pro writer by the way, bye! :)

Aw man, you're not making it more gory than this story. :( Oh well... can you at least make it as gory as you can handle? That would definitely make me read the sequel. Oh yeah, by the way, the only reason I asked you to answer my last question when you posted this chapter was because I don't have an account for this site. So will you answer me at the top of the next chapter like you did last time? Love the story by the way, I can't wait to see the ending. Also, what is the title for the sequel going to be?