Reviews for With a little help from the Colonel |
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liysyl chapter 1 . 3/18 Loved the twist thanks for sharing your story. |
Rosalieemmamailie chapter 1 . 4/18/2019 love how she stopped his proposal! |
Rosalieemmamailie chapter 1 . 4/18/2019 very cute ! |
DS chapter 1 . 10/5/2018 Lovely! |
nancyjeanne chapter 1 . 8/1/2018 Beautiful story, thank you! |
nessy22 chapter 1 . 2/4/2018 I was rummaging trough FF a little bit and found this gem here. Loved it! |
Jansfamily4 chapter 1 . 12/3/2016 Wouldn't it be nice if it had gone like this? Yes, much better. Thank you |
h2olgd chapter 1 . 3/6/2016 Very Sweet, the Colonel has long been one of my favorite characters! |
EngLitLover chapter 1 . 10/17/2015 Nice twist. |
Motherof8 chapter 1 . 9/13/2015 Loved it. Thanks |
MartaS chapter 1 . 8/31/2015 I gave a try another of your one-shots and I don't regret it. Normally I wouldn't give much thought to 'fairness' with a fic like that, since this is a 'what if' in which no one ends up hurt, but having in mind the previous one-shot I read, I can see that this time, though Elizabeth had been given her dose of humility, Darcy didn't yet. But in the end, he did overcome his objections enough to aks for her hand and we can assume that getting to know her more, and her family- like the Gardiners he will improve more and more in this score. Mostly though since the story ends on a happy note for both of them, it does not seem like you are trying to take revenge on one of the beloved characters. But anyway- I did enjoy this one a lot more :-) |
nanciellen chapter 1 . 4/3/2015 Great story. I enjoyed this very much. A great angst free alternative to what happened in the novel. Thank you. |
1sunfun chapter 1 . 1/27/2015 Good. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2014 what a great ending, and it makes a great detail of sense! |
4leafclover0120 chapter 1 . 12/19/2013 :) |