Reviews for Comedy Duel
BeautifulChaos20 chapter 2 . 9/26/2014
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I love Discord. And I love Pinkie Pie. What a perfect combination
RandomHamster33 chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
I don't wear pants. HahahhahahahahahahahahahhAhhahHhH! Oh my god, I laughed so hard right there, I don't know why. XD I can imagine his face as he said that. All serious.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/23/2013
d'awwwww
Digi-fanCatt chapter 2 . 4/22/2013
Talk about twist ending :P
ShiningShadow1965 chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Ok how about something a bit elaborate using Rarity as the subject. Push Rarity down a hill in a shopping cart making her miss trees etc but will go through a gauntlet of honey, pine needles then tar and finally feathers let pinky start it off. I love this idea and love this start and adding you I hope you take my idea I will await for future chapter bravo.
Legend of Derpy chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Eh.

You're not thrilling me with this story here. Pinkie, for one, does not get jealous that easily. If anything, she'd shake Discord's hand out of pure excitement for his funny joke and forget she was wearing a shock button, then laugh about her forgetting after Discord was shocked. Discord seems to be in character, but not so much Pinkie Pie. Your format is also pretty sad. it's like you're forcing the bits of "comedy" onto your audience without giving an atmosphere, and that's not okay. You also are in need of a spell check, you didn't even spell Sugar Cube Corner correctly.

All in all, you've got some basis for characterization, but this needs some serious work to blossom into anything worth reading. Perhaps you should hire an experienced beta.
chipmunkfanantic chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
I have a suggestion and this one's a doozy for you Pinkie don't worry Discord i have something funny . They should tell knock knock jokes those are classics and yo mama jokes /insults
BewitchingMayham chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
They should have a contest of who can throught the most cream pies in rarity's face! Tell them it was Bloody7851's idea, ka?
Digi-fanCatt chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
lear to speak Esperanto, It looks and sounds silly! :D Universal language! :D