Omg this is total crack and I love it!

That's a lovely tale.

Now you made me interested in this crack pairing. Melody is prob my favorite character from hxh.

Adorable! I'd love to see more! Crack pairings are my favorite and you write the scenario so well

Another unusual pairing from you, but it works! Melody is such a nice character. I almost died at Feitan's rather bold announcement. Lol. Steal her, eh? That was kinda sweet, as far as a declaration of love/interest(was it?) from Feitan goes. Tnx for sharing!

This is lovely. Senritsu deserves happiness. Her heart is beautiful.
I love the idea that Feitan was so moved by her music that he was kind to her and wants to see her again.
I also adore that you paid attention to his foreigner status and changed his speech patterns accordingly.

Cheers,
Lili

An exciting AU with lots of potential. Thanks for writing!

I really loved this story. I had originally read To Steal music and To Retrieve music before this. But I feel that this was a terrific prequel to both stories. I mean you nail Melodie's and Fei-kuns characters so well. You keep them in character and don't go so painfully over board with the crack pairing. I honestly just enjoyed this story that I was sad when it ended. But I do have one, and only one thing to critique you about: I think it would have been wiser in your part to add more details about how Feitan appeared. You added a little but overall I felt myself trying to think of Feitan appearance through my own image of him in the manga\anima instead of within the context provided in the text. But still that was the only thing that I have to say, besides I personally didn't see it as that big a deal anyhow. Oh, and may I please make a request to? If you have the time could you perhaps possibly create this from Feitan perspective PLEASE. I really would like to see Feitan thoughts of melody and how he feels when ripping her shirt. That along with when they both gaze each other in the eyes...I'm just do curious to ponder his reaction. Also I have all summer to go here, so ya know heh, hits lots if time on my hands to read. But final word, keep writing I really enjoy you works (especially your hxh ones and hope you may take my plea unto consideration). And by :-)

Did you ever thought making this in feitan's POV? I'm curious about it

Oh my God of Mischief this is one hel of a CRACK! XD

Hi! I'm the one named "MAYU" who commented awhile ago. I forgot to log in so I'm commenting again. XD

Very interesting! I like how you did the 'think outside of the box' thing for this story :D

Very interesting! I like how you did the 'think outside of the box' thing for this story :D

very interesting.

so strange but... ok.

This was very good! I love it :)