I like the concept behind this: during TotH, Amata did indeed have reasons behind her choices, but her execution was extremely callous. On the other hand, I feel the second half of this was a bit heavy-handed in making Amata the Bad-Girl. Mind you, I agree on the broader terms, but a bit more subtlety in the first lines on dialogue could have made the confrontation more satisfying in the end.

Still, a very enjoyable read for a topic I've rarely seen taken with the seriousness it deserves.

Sincerely,
Alexeij

Awesome 216 reference and great one shot

Wow. I regret having passed this up last year.

Nice oneshot

I don't really like the subject matter but holy shit, talk about true poetry.

"Some called him the Last Best Hope of Humanity, and emulated him like some majestic icon; others had deemed him a villain and attempted to snuff out his life like a flickering flame that threatened to ignite a forest fire. But the winds of change had already been sown. The waters of life now ran freely and purely throughout the Capital Wasteland."

Damn son.

Hey man I really like this story please continue writing

One piece of advice. You don't need to say "on the lips" every time you talk about a kiss. We're mostly adults, we can usually assume that's what "kisses/kissed her/him" means, unless you state otherwise.

Depuis le temps que je veux lire une fic comme celle-là ! Amata se prend enfin ce qu'elle mérite !
Bravo et bon courage !

Finally ! I've waited a long time to read a story like this ! Amata finally get what she deserve
Thank you.

at last iv been waiting to read a fanfiction like this she should of been beaten to death tho

Didn't really like it, Sarah is more of an awkward aromantic, warriorlike, but caring and feminine all the same, in this she was too, butch?

The whole fight scene was also just really awkward