Reviews for A Baby Changes Everything |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story so far Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow it means how much lily loves her son that he wants to go out with his father's best friend pathetic writing, ruined this ff for me no need to read this shit now |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you meant spectre instead of sceptre. (twice at the end of this chapter.) |
![]() ![]() Cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty cool Lily, cute Harry, loved the Charlus/Dunbledore backstory. Forgiving Peter just like that was unbelievable, makes no sense. The Broom accident ruse and the scion laws also make little sense, why would that overcome the original laws? A fun story about sudden parentage of a toddler. That is the main theme. |
![]() ![]() Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww I love Jily sooo much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent start! Love the characterizations. Funny situation, too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this hurtssss. whyy? |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a wonderful story and great ending, loved the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. James and Lily are cute together. He is definitely maturing and Lily is loosening up. Fun fact, Sherlock Holmes never said that in any of Doyle's stories. Good work. |