Reviews for The Mercenary |
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The What-If Writer chapter 1 . 5/24/2013 This was amazingly insightful with a very sophisticated way of writing- and I love the idea you've put forward with the adventures being real serious matters that Spyro overlooks. Are you continuing this? Its very intriguing and I love your style. Hope to see more, but even if I don't, well done! |
Lady Mayflower chapter 1 . 2/9/2013 My good sir, I tip my hat to you with the classiest of applause. This story is BEAUTIFUL. I adore the picture you've painted of Gnasty's aftermath. It really gave me a whole new light on the real chaos that was caused during the events of Spyro 1. And you present it in a very polished way. Your writing's lovely, and it really speaks true to the world and the characters. Especially Spyro, who I imagine won't be fond of Tuesdays after this mess. My only complaint is that now I feel bad that my coverage of Ripto's Rage isn't this good. XD But that's just more of a compliment for you. Kudos! Thanks for the great read, and I really hope you come back with more. :) |
CharlieFibrosis chapter 1 . 2/2/2013 As a gentlemen who loves to indulge himself in the classic Spyro franchise, fertile with nostaligic memories, this brought a smile to my face. I don't know what you plan on doing with this, whether it will just be a oneshot, or if you plan on turning it into a story, but I loved the imagry and storyline. It shows that while the game jumps from the end of game 1 to game 2, that we assume everything went back to normal after the ending of the first game. This story shows a deeper mechanism and storyline. For that I applaud you. |
Malbutorius chapter 1 . 1/30/2013 Well, He is a child after all, and it isent like hes going to take resonsability for things like 'Starvation' and 'Medical need', and now after fighting the Gnorks hes become a Blood knight more or less, Well, then again, he is a Dragon... |