I'm dying. I need more. Why isn't this finished? It's so good. It's actually incredible and I'm dying

I can't stop thinking about the conversation that's bound to happen between Loki and Fury soon and I am living for it. It's going to be so great. I'm so excited to see what Loki says. This is a great story. A but heavy on the introspection but it works. Also, I'm surprised there wasn't a single reference to Harry Potter in the whole, "dont speak his name" convo from Darcy's side. Or even when doing the meditation. It all has very thin veils of aspects of legilimency in HP but I get that you might not want to draw that conclusion if you're trying to remain serious in the story. Anyways, great work so far!

I would be astonished if Fury didn't know what was going on between Darcy and Loki. I'm assuming he's reviewing each and every interaction they have that's the real reason he's having her stay at the base for (oh so conveniently) a month. He's going to use Loki's interactions with Darcy as part of his judgement on if Loki can be saved. I just wonder how long it will take for Loki to figure it out.

wow this dream walking has sucked for them! i can't wait to see what happens next! i hope you don't abandon this story! its getting so good! :)

Oh please continue writing this story :)

Plz update

Evil spot to abandon your story. Lol

I’m honestly begging you to update this. Even if it’s just one more chapter. That cliffhanger is killing me.

I really hope you update one day

This is a wonderful story. Please don't let it end on such an intense cliffhanger. I humbly ask that you... KEEP ON WRITING!

Oh my gosh! please update, this is the best loki darcy story i have ever read, its totally beautiful and amazing. You are an awesome writer

I binged read ALL of this amazing story, and I can't WAIT for an update. I'm very new to this ship, and I already adore it. I feel like you've done both of them a credit separately and together. Just lovely. Thanks for sharing!

AHHHHH! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!

Hurry up damn it. This story too good to wait this long! (and I started reading last night)

I love it! I love your take on the Loki/Darcy relationship, and I'm sooo glad they kissed, even if it was in a dream/nightmare/netherworld state. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters.