Reviews for Alone in a Crowded Room
BeforeThePrologue chapter 3 . 8/6
What an interesting story, eager to see where it goes.
pleaseupdate chapter 9 . 7/11
continue it so the story goes to a point where there married and shes pregnant or something, I really want to see there future!
JasmineDragon22 chapter 36 . 6/27
To be honest I was hoping Prim being reaped and Katniss volunteering. But I loved this story from beginning to end. All your little twists and character development were excellently done. I’m going to hunt down that sequel now. I hope it’s up.
mfgb chapter 36 . 3/29
I stumbled upon this story and I've been reading it for the past few days. Love this story so much! You and your hubby are so talented.

I love how you wrote Peeta coping with his injury. I really felt his pain there. Also, I'm so proud of him coming full circle and standing up to his mother like that.

Kudos to you and your husband!
Loti-miko chapter 36 . 3/17

I’m speechless.

This has to be one of the saddest, sweetest most beautiful stories I’ve read for this fandom.

Sad because of the tragedy behind Peeta’s injury. The injustice of it. Every time I read his POV I always ended up feeling so desperate and restless. I’ve been sick myself, so I could relate to some of his pain and it was torture. I was always on the edge of my seat. Either rooting for him to get better, or being afraid of his condition getting worse. It didn’t help that he stayed so sweet throughout the story.

Then Katniss was so in character and so human. It was so interesting to read her in a setting that was so different from the book. Sure, her dad died, but her mother was able to snap out of her depression and look after her girls. Pretty interesting stuff to read, considering her dynamic with Katniss is so different in both cannon and fanfiction.

I really had this big ass long review that I wanted to write but the words escape me now. I’m just impressed. And that ending? Offf. Like a punch to the guts but in a good way.

I don’t know what to say other than congratulations for writing something so perfect. Thank you for not romanticizing Peeta’s injury and for not fixing every issue for the last chapter. Thank you for keeping it real, but for also making hopeful and beautiful.

Just, thank you!
Juststella1 chapter 36 . 2/24
I'm so glad to have read this story. Both you and your hubby did a great job. Thank you for sharing.
Juststella1 chapter 5 . 2/9
Peeta remembered his own secret frosting recipe. That's a good sign.
Juststella1 chapter 4 . 2/9
Delly was Peeta's friend and she should have visited him sooner, no matter what Rye suggested.
Juststella1 chapter 3 . 2/9
Kudos to both you and your husband. This story is amazing.
Juststella1 chapter 1 . 2/9
Oh my god! What a horrible woman! Poor Peeta!

Rye not helping protect his brother was just as bad.
SeeMeLaugh chapter 36 . 12/26/2019
This story was amazing! Thank you!
thepriceyoupay chapter 36 . 10/14/2019
is there still going to be a sequel?
Winegirl chapter 36 . 8/13/2019
The was fantastic. I sat and read the whole story in one sitting. I couldn’t put it down. Thank you
Guest chapter 36 . 8/10/2019
aimsm chapter 20 . 8/9/2019
Just commenting to say I’m still loving this story!
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