Love the story. Please please please please please please please update soon

Can you please continue this? It's so good :)

Still no update for this..hmm hope thre would be..i love addson/mere ship..

i loved it. i can't wait for the next chapter.

nice

Glad to see an update. I'm enjoying the progression of the story. Looking forward to more one on one time. Plz update soon

Aw, damn. Derek's here. Boooo. I hope he doesn't try to mess up the good thing Mere and Addie have going. I vote for some Addi-Mere smut in the future, please (: I am rather fond of them!

Is that foreshadowing? Already hinting at cheating and they only have been on one date. Meredith was overly reactive about the husband to Addison as they hadn't kissed, let alone talked about their 'almost' kiss.
The repeated dialog at the beginning is unnecessary: we can always read the end of the last chapter if we forget what happened before.
Thanks again for writing!

Pretty hilarious twist!
/Derek Shepherd was Addison's ex husband. The couple divorced after Derek found Addison in bed with one of his colleagues…one of his female colleagues which surprised the man even more./

I like that Meredith still came into the room, rather than running away (which is cliche).
I like the quizzical ending to this chapter. Nicely played.

Another short chapter, but only one location so smooth I suppose... balance is key.

So is Meredith going to be sitting in the front now? Last chapter she was in the back, I think she'd move closer now. It didn't really clarify here, just said she found her seat.

Yeah, it's just that it's zooming into pwp land. Meredith's panties are already soaked, she's hungover, tired, and still ready to pretty much masturbate herself right then and there.
More detail to build the story up: how big is the class size? How does Addison already know to call Meredith by her first name on the first day? etc...
Meredith must be drunk to dial her professor the night of for a ride home. Really, a taxi is a better call at this point in time. And Meredith really is making poor choices if she's getting wasted again the night after having gotten wasted the night before school.

I'm glad that they didn't spend the night together.

The chapter length is better, but there's a lot of 'scenes' that chop it up and make the pacing not as smooth.

Sorry to critique so much, I do appreciate you writing :)

I love the premise!
The chapter is half the length I'd prefer, but that's how it goes.
I tend to like it when the attraction isn't so realized by the protagonist from the beginning. I especially like it when they've not really identified as a lesbian. Here it appears that she's ready to roar. That's fine, just letting you know what I enjoy more.
Thanks for writing! This is the best pairing on this show (anything with Addison and f/f actually ;)

only thing I think you should do is make the chaps longer

Very small chapter, but really amazing! Please update soon (:

please write more!