This is hilarious.

Lol nice . Cute what happned to Draco. Lol snape ahah Gary the lucky boy. The twins unleashed a true beast .

Oh oh hogwarts is going to get demolished. With how easily he is upset by everything.

In a sense Hagrid can be more dangerous than Voldemort . Nice chapter

Shed probably castrate then . I total wanna see hermione ‘so reactions

Lol. The twins having more success at recruiting than dumbles n Baldie had ever done .

Ahah the twins comments.

And here I thought he’d. Get some crazy result like sparkle and look really pale .

Oh wow. Oh oh hermione and the twins and the incentive .

This is absolutely hilarious. I gave myself hiccups, laughing so hard.

darn good

Such amusing chapter, I loved it

Loved nearly passed myself from laughing so hard at magic girl hermione keep up the good fight and remember plot bunny's aremail ur friends

This was great. Thanks for the insight into Fleur I like her she is an interesting, capable and formidable woman. I am pleased she has friends even if they are not with her.

A nice line "he was well conditioned to follow the orders of demanding women." I hope Fleur stands up to Neville's Gran and gets him a new wand. One with Veela hair would be a nice twist. By stories end maybe find him a girlfriend or wife. I always hoped Harry would leave the UK and marry a Veela in the last book. Maybe Neville can get the chance.

I liked the power of the Allure. I wonder what would happen if she used in on Neville's father he might recover just to impress her. Then Neville's mum can recover in order to teach her husband a lesson or to find out how her son ended up with a Veela.

I am beyond pleased Fleur won't end up Mrs Weasley I never liked how she was treated by Molly, Ginny and Hermione the future Weasley. Fleur deserved better and to be respected. I don't think she would want to live or work in the UK never mind send her kids to Hogwarts of all places.

A nice twist about Ginny, Fleur can fashion her into something more than a fan girl or silly little girl. Or teach her to respect Fleur.

A pity Harry can't have Gabrielle on his team as that would drive Fleur spare even if she was just a fan or mascot.

Where is Sirius when you need him he seems the type to be enthralled by a Veela or respect her formidable power. Maybe Fawkes or Hedwig could visit Fleur. The Veela seem to be part avian so they might get on well with birds. Fawkes enthralled would be funny.

It's good of Neville that he is starting to understand Harry's life and the drink would be a nice gesture.

Thanks for this chapter.

Poor Neville, I feel sorry for him. At least he grew stronger thanks to Fleur's molding.
Someting tells me Ginny isn't going to be as compliant. We all remember how she hated 'Phlegm' in canon.

Heh, poor Neville.