Aww, sweet. Though I doubt Bombur would actually reach out for his illision.

Very well written.

Oh gosh this was brilliant! I actually loved this so much! It's so cute! :3 all the dwarves are so in character (I especially loved the line about Bifur holding Bofur's sparkler! And I'd love to know what Bofur's sparkler was... o.O ) but seriously this was just fantastic! I absolutely loved it XD

One of the nicest fics I read about these two. I'm not a shipper, so I was as un-amused with Thorin's sparkler as himself, but the rest of it is just perfect. Nice to see dwarves having fun albeit for a little while.

now that is jjust adorable. and yeah, of course! Thorin is so cute and stoic u just can't NOT love him! poor, clueless Bilbo...:D

Well done!

aw! so adorable! love your writing style, btw. i'd love to see some more durincest from you!

Funny.

Oh my god this is so brilliant. I love that Thorin is so unamused by the TRUTH and yet drawn to it again. I'd love to read more like this from you!

cute

Oh how freakin' cute! Let's just pretend the end of the book never happens, okay? :3 TIME MUST BE MADE FOR SILLY GAMES.

What a positively adorable and creative idea! Love love loved it! Bilbo and Thorin's interaction was well-written, and I loved their reactions to Thorin's firework. D'aww. You write Thilbo very subtly and well. :)

This was a very cute idea! I love sparklers myself and we set a few off this past summer-secretly so we wouldn't be caught of course (we're still not sure if its illegal in our state or not-though with the drought I thought so). Loved the images of the dwarves, they seemed all so perfectly them. But of course my favorite was Thorin's . Simple but with a thousand words that little sparkler! Silly games indeed! Look who wanted to play the silly games in the first place!

Beautiful story, and the idea is very interesting! I had that cosy and at the same time excited fairytalish feeling while reading I haven't experienced for so long... Thank you so much for sharing the story with us, I'm really looking forward to reading more from you!

Brilliant chapter. Can't wait for more :)

Interesting.