Beautifully written - good characterization, nice grammar - would have
been nice to have a bit more an adventure.

Thank you, for a good read.

please tell us prologue of paradise lost

prologue of paradise lost

Not enough words in the English language for how much I want you to finish this story. Please?

Please write more soon.

fritting awsome!

Wait... it says complete, but there's more coming.. and it's been three years..

It was so good, you can't just end like that!

theses last few chapters were really good! glad to see she was able to get better.

very interesting that buffy was able to see max's memories in her dreams.

So when are you going to show them being able to go home?

plase keep up the good work. and update soon.

So far this is an awesome story!

I really like how you have everyone so excatly spot on in character. and I think you did a good job showing everyyone dealing with the sitchuation.

I thought It was so histrical when you showed max's reaction to wall-mart! you really gave thought to those little deatils that people wouldn't even think to think about.

You have a great sense of humor beacuse I've just been giggleing thru out this whole story so far!

your truly done a great job with this story!

Totaly kicks have got to hear can't leave this story!1

WONDERFUL combination of the two different series! PLEASE UPDATE soon!

Okay - you'll have to post the next chapter quickly now! lol - Loved Buffy's annoyance with the way Max and Logan virtually ignored each other after all the drama! Okay...I'm waiting...waiting...waiting...:):)

Only one chapter to go until I've read all you've posted so far! I must admit I got a bit toey for a bit more of Logan in that chapter! You have to understand that I'm completely shallow and my concentration is inclined to wander a bit when I don't see the 'L' word dotted throughout the chapter, lol! I'm so bad:( Anyway - I still managed to read and enjoy and I particularly liked the bit with Max talking to Joyce about Logan, lol, plus the bits about the photos and Max trying to figure out what a family or a mother means. That was a really nice touch!

Excellent! Loved the comparisons to post-Pulse Seattle and Buffy's perceptions of Max and Logan's relationship. Tense scene at the end - very nicely written with Max admitting the truth about herself. I enjoyed Max telling Buffy about how she met Logan, lol! On to next chapter! - I forgot to say that I'm enjoying these nice long chapters!

Good chapter - loved Max's uneasiness with the situation. Some of Buffy's thoughts made me laugh, lol! The Spike/Max confrontation was tense - what does it all mean?