UGH! ADORABLE!

Bittersweet, just as everything concerning this two always tastes.
Great job. :)

Want another ch

Aw

Awww this was such a cute one-shot!
it left me feeling a little sad though, especially the last line 'because you'll push me away if you wake up'
feel so sorry for takano XD

this was really well written and i loved reading it :)

WHAAAAT
This made me feel sorry for Takano! Awww! Takano! You can call him by his given name even if your holding baaaaaaaack! This is an awesome story!

Aaaaawwwwww! KAWAII!

I've read this story at least 4 times and I never get bored of it. It's beautiful and sad. Every time I read this I get teary eyed. I've even recomended the story to my friend. I just want to say that I love this fic.

The thing that i like about writers is that, they hit the pause button on that little scene and expand it to something so detailed and beautiful. Like this one. Well written btw. Thanks so much for writing. :D

I loved this.

Awe, so much tension! I love your title and therefore also the theme of your story! Takano really is my favorite character in the anime by far. You captured him well.

Wow. Such an amazing story. Sweet and Sincere :)

GP x

Despite all the reviewing I'm behind on, I couldn't resist...This is a wonderful, wonderful piece, and Takano's POV was well written. And your tenses amaze me, truly, it is tough to remember to write in present tense (for me) and I couldn't spot any spelling or grammer mistakes, which gives you a big thumbs up in my book.

The starting line and the ending line go hand in hand, and are probably my favorite lines out of the whole oneshot. The first paragraph is an excellent way, in my opinion, to start off this oneshot, with a thoughtful, intriging (excuse my porr spelling; I think I spelled that wrong XD) tone with a touch of sorrow. In the oneshot, where it states "as the clock ticks slowly, tiredly, heavily" I suspect there is a bit of symboliziation (probably spelled that wrong too) intertwined - possibly relating to Takano? Takano and his waiting for Ritsu to just give in, and he's getting worn down with each denial? My suspicions

Sha The things spilled when drunk. Tsk. Leave it up to him to make Takano think about his actions with a simple sentence. The sentence written that Ritsu says was perfectly executed and in character. And also an excellent way to get the plot moving. I like the little details you peppered (lol, peppered?) in, always keeping in mind Takano's desire for Ritsu.

Cute! :3 We all know Ritsu does that in his sleep XD. And of course Takano will ponder over what Ritsu says - I think he thinks about anything Ritsu says when drunk, or mad. Because that is when he is truly honest, as you made a note of it in the oneshot.

This part to me shows how...gentle Takano really is. He truly loves Ritsu and does think about his opinions, and the fact that he wants to preserve this moment hits hard on how little this peace between the pair occurs. The heartbreaking part when he nearly says Ritsu, and instead thinks that he doesn't have the right was portrayed wonderfully.

Overall, a wonderful oneshot. It's complete, but I am so tempted to put an alert on it. XD Anyways, for someone who hasn't written in a while, this was crazy good. :D If you write more from SIH, I'll be looking forward to future works.

-Eraser Bitz

I loved it. It was painfully sweet. And Onodera is right Takano shouldn't be harrassing him. :)

I want to cry now... (T-T) i love how you captured Takano's inner struggles! Officially stalked!