OMG THAK YOU FOR NOT KILING NERO amazing story I cryed 5*

That was beautiful! Great job!

I LOVED THIS STORY. It made my laugh it almost made me cry (I'd say it made me cry because I really wanted to, but I'm a heartless freak of nature that can only cry after dreaming of her grandfather's soul dying in Hell), but most of all I could relate. I see myself as Dante in this situation because I have a good friend like Nero that I'm always there for. I have some whining to do about grammar, but I can overlook it easily in favor of this plot and character development and interaction. A good writer is like a puppeteer. They pull the story and characters to life and hide the strings, pulling the reader into the action. You've done an excellent job of engaging the reader. You need to update this things status to complete (total side note). And I totally think you should've written 'Scene' or 'And scene' at the end just to add to the script like atmosphere, but other than that and my horrible habit of being a grammar Nazi, this was a wonderful read and I have the exact opposite of any form of complaints!

Best of luck ;) IvoryQueen

Aaaaw, this was a great fic, its really sad and made me cry, but good none the less. It tells the truth about most of todays society, and the negitive effects of those banished from not fitting in to being 'normal' and i even was able to relate with Nero at his mention of agoraphobia as its something i have to deal with.
Thnx for writing
:3

AWWWWWWWWWWWWW! KAWAII!also Just 'cause some religious people say it's bad almost every one thinks you will go to hell. Your NOT going to hell and God is NOT going to punish you for being gay/lesbo God WANTS you to BE free not scared to tell the world that your a homosexual. So tell me whats so wrong about homosexuality?

p.s. sorry for the rant it just pisses me off that so many people think that homosexuality is bad. :)

That was cute, sad, and a million other words. Thanks for writing a happy story this time, I appreciate it.

This is Heartwarming. The OOC is kind of nice, it's adorable to see Dante be all cute and cuddly. What I really like is how realistic the story is, and making Trish 'blonde' was genius. Great story, I love your writing style:)

that was Amazing!:)

Daw! That was so cute and sad! I really loved the happy ending. I was a little iffy about the plot at first (I didn't think I'd like the idea of a crazy Nero) but I'm glad I kept reading. This was definately worth it. I felt so bad for Nero throughout this whole thing and I even felt bad for Dante. He never gave up even when Nero wanted to. I really like how protective you made Dante over Nero. I feel like it had a bigger impact than if he would've just been mildly protective. I absolutly HATED their parents, but is that really a surprise? Yay for uncle Vergil, even though he didn't really have a part besides just being there.

I loved the little flashback scene of when they were little! You made them seem so adorable. I still have the image of a little Dante and Nero jumping out of a clothes rack and scaring people.

Nero's psychotic episodes made me want to cry. (You're so mean to Nero! :]) Words can't describe how many times I almost cried when Nero had a breakdown. I think I'm too emotional and this just played on my emotions.

When Dante found Nero in the tub I was so scared you were going to kill him off! But then Dante saved him and I breathed a sigh of relief. When Dante saw the "different" cut into Nero's arm my eyes actually teared up. I just wanted to hug them both. Again I'm very happy for the happy ending.

Over all, great job with this. Again, I'm glad I kept reading. It was amazing to say they least.

Love,
Razor

P.S. Whatever happened to their restaurant? Did they end up having to close it down or did it have a miraculous recovery?

...oh, I feel happy! I'm so glad there was a happy ending after all! Nero and Dante are just so lucky to have eachother...
Hope to see you posting more stories soon! and thanks again...!
Take care and good luck!

*sob*... damn, you are a Master of Sweet Angst! These three chapters were too strong, and I almost cried again with this one... damn, why is life so cruel...?
I'm glad nero survived, but everything looks so gloomy... will they find a light at the end of this dark corridor...?
Thanks for everything.
Take care and good luck!

...damn... Nero's parents are idiots. I hope Dante will save Nero from the crazed void he is falling in... all they need is love (as cheesy as it souds, lol).
Take care and good luck!

The stoners' dialogue in this chapter (and the chapter before) always crack me up. Also, Nero at last is taking the iniciative... some good ol' loving is all they need... and eachother.
Take care and good luck!

Lol, Dante and Nero in the crack house! hope they come out of that experience unscathed... also, loved how everyone wehn quite philosophical near the end...
Take care and good luck!

Again, I'm so happy to see you updating this fic... the story is so well narrated, and the events are interesting and emotional...
I'll be eagerly waiting for the next update!
Take care and good luck!