Reviews for Twelve Months Of The Year
greendestiny1523 chapter 15 . 4/18/2018
I'm enjoying this story, but I'm also guessing you only made it a couple chapters or so with revising because the more I read the more things don't line up. At first Rose had gotten off a 12 hour shift before meeting up with Dimitri, then she doesn't have a job. At 31 Dimitri was 10 years older than Rose, then she's 18. Rose is working so Lissa can get through college(it also seems like once Lissa finished college she'd cover the bills so Rose could go), then Lissa hasn't started college but has a job while Rose can't find one. Tasha was Dimitri's secretary and they started sleeping together then decided to marry for business reasons, then suddenly they've been involved since college.
Aside from all the discrepancies I keep reading because I want to see what course the story will take. Also some of your lines are beautifully written.
I think if you do ever decide to come back and straighten out the details this could be a really good story. As is, it's a bit difficult to read because I have to adjust my understanding of the backstory every time I read an account that conflics with everything I've previously read.
Zulfije Belikova chapter 73 . 2/18/2018
One of the best stories I have read!
Thank you xxxx
Guest chapter 73 . 12/21/2017
Well, this story was long and convoluted... but I actually enjoyed it. It was silly and funny and warm and messy and aweful and scary and so many things. And I did enjoy the epilogue.
donnamiley chapter 5 . 12/17/2017
Oh my God, Dimitri is an asshole!
Rose's fan chapter 73 . 11/24/2017
Abe dead...well that's a hard pill to swallow..
Guest chapter 73 . 11/24/2017
Wow... I must say that this was a nice story and convincingly human. Loved every bit of it except for the part where Dimitri hurt rose... I might be biased here because I love Rosemarie Hathaway to death
russia2774 chapter 73 . 7/1/2017
Cried when abe died but loved it
princesslara99 chapter 1 . 1/16/2017
nice story..!
Crystal x chapter 73 . 12/31/2015
This was really good love it x
Veronica Rivera chapter 72 . 9/10/2015
Loved the story! best one so far
It's Kris chapter 72 . 8/9/2015
Its me again.. haha, but I just realized today is the third year anniversary of this fic! Anyway I was really excited upon seeing that haha :)
It's Kris chapter 73 . 8/9/2015
Finally finished this fic! Wow I must say that I have loved and enjoyed reading this the whole way through! I can't wait to read more of your fics :)
Guest chapter 73 . 8/5/2015
BEST. STORY. EVER. ! I LOVED IT! I LOVE IT! ITS AMAZING! YOU'RE AMAZING! I LAUGHED AND CRIED SOO HARD AND OMG BEST STORY EVER I LOVED IT THE FEEELLLLSSSS ASDFGHJKL!:&:&:&:&/$:h$sjdidke zhsksbdoa
VampireSweet200 chapter 2 . 8/5/2015
So I was rereading chapter 2 and I think you have two difference year they graduate high school one is six month and the other is three year... is the six months new rewritten or the old version. Because the old version was six months... I love it please update soon.
diana254 chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
So glad you decided to writr again! Love the new chapter 2
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