I think a rewrite should be done, improve in areas that you believe that are garbage, and make it one big story instead of a trilogy like you planed, and your right Imagination under Fire wasn't that good, I couldn't understand the plot half of the time, hopefully someday you do the rewrite, thanks for at least the first story being great.

I loved this fic. But you should rewrite it. There were a lot of spelling mistakes and too many fourth wall breaks in my opinion. But still, great story.

I'm a guy! AND THAT DON'T MEAN CRAP TO ME! LOLZ

Wow. Where to start? After having just read this entire fic, my mind is still reeling. First off, this was truly an amazing story, in spite of its flaws. Now, I'm a real stickler for spelling, punctuation and grammar, and the first few chapters were also kind of hard to follow. But once the plot began to develop, and with the help of your co-writer, I really started to get pulled into your tale. All the characters, and especially Calvin, acted totally in character throughout. And your extensive knowledge of the comic strip was always spot on. I should know, I studied my own collection at length for my story 'Tiger By The Tail' which I just finished yesterday.

Your tale had an authentic feel to it, especially in developing Calvin's wild imagination, and having that same imagination used against him by the villain of the story. Calvin's dialogue rang true throughout, as well as Hobbes. I also enjoyed the many funny bits and references to other shows and cartoons, and the occasional breaking of the fourth wall, as well as the new characters, especially Althea.

But the highlight had to be the knockdown drag-out apocalyptic cataclysm as all of Calvin's personas and alter-egos joined togther in the final battle. That was exceptional. So hats off to your own wild imagination, perhaps only a little less than Calvin's. And I'll look forward to reading the next fic in your series.

MA

(Moss) I absolutely love this story! I put it on favorites. Calvin, Hobbes, and all the other characters from the comics are exactly how I thought they'd say/react. THIS IS AWESOME! Can't wait for sequel:)

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dude, this was one of The Most Awsome fanfics i have ever read.
(barely contained hysterics leads to subdued tones)

can't Wait for the sequel(s)

WOW! Being a Calvin and Hobbes can myself, I can tell you got their characters down well. This was absolutely AWESOME!
Please, try to dish out that sequel ASAP!

AWESOME story! :D
It was hilarious, well characterized, ingeniously designed, and brilliantly done. I love your stupendously funny breaks in the fourth wall, and I can't possibly voice how much I loved this story! :D

I like your story, the best one I think for Calvin and Hobbes. As for the way you don't space out your conversations, I'm okay with it. 'Artistic license' as they say. Perhaps it is your stream of consciousness. A narrative poem. Whatever it is, its great.

FORESHADOWING!

I can't wait for the sequel. Great story!

*thumbs up* and ROFL at the Lord of the Rings reference at the end.

Also, your acronym for the new GROSS title didn't show up at all, so you may want to fix that.

Great ending though!

(btw, whatever happened to Moe?)

...I don' wanna know.
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL! :D

YES! BONUS CHAPTER! 8D

*hits Chester A. Bum over head with pipe*
Thank me by writing another story. Please? :)

But there is no next button! *le gasp* PLEASE UPDATE SOON!