This is the story I was looking 4 over the last 3 year's ty for writing it

Last time this was updated, I was still in college. What’s going on?

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An accurate description on a medieval peasant
Inbred, bad dental hygiene and dirty

It's so sad to see this fic go on for so long without a update.

Okie...

Wish I got to say goodbye at least.

So, I geuss its over...that really sucks...I waited and kept waiting. Yet nothing can through. Your story was one of the best I've seen out there on fanfic. I only hoped I would see its end. I don't know if you're still on this site anymore, or if you even check it. But I miss these stories. I miss Roland and the wolves. I miss your world of Calradia. Most of all I miss you and your writing.

NAIVE...

man, you are the most naive author here . .

simply look the world in 'white and black ' manner. Your Roland would be killed in reality thnks to his Super naivety

u suck

Great! I write this after an urge for a second reading, and after finishing, I really wish I hadn't.

I'm kinda disappointed honestly. I was hoping to see a tale of someone from the real world, being thrown in a medieval time, rising himself up from a humble college student to a warrior. Mentally maturing, coming up with quick schemes, saving other witches, winning and losing battles. I wanted to see Roland grow from a boy to a man. . .

But you skipped THREE whole years and ruined that chance.

I mean, it's still there. But the "how" and "why" he got to where he is, will probably remain a mystery, or worse, explained with a bunch of exposition. That kinda crap annoys me.

Anyway, I know I'm probably jumping the gun with my assumptions, but I couldn't help but write out my disappointment over your choice to avoid what should've been a huge of amount of character development for Roland and struggles he would've gone through when he was still weak.

At this point, you may as well have written it to be about a random person that lived in this world, instead of someone from the real world.

I'm still willing to give this story a shot. It may not have started the way I was hoping for, but it may still have something for me.

PLEASE MAKE MORE, IM DYING TO READ MORE OF YOUR WORK!

HI YOU ARE SO COOL YOU ARE A BEAST AT WRITING BOOKS WRITE MORE

Another great Chapter! It's good to see that you're not abandoning this story, as this story has me hooked. I read the first two chapters of Inquisition and I'm looking forward to the rest of it!

Keep up the great work

nice long chapter this time. i like the meeting between haydee and arwa. i do think that you should have roland settle down but not in any one lords territory. just an idea i thought would be good. maybe put him in the 4 kingdoms wasteland or whatever you called it. lots of caravans and lords use that pass in the game to go from one place to another. just a thought. good luck in your writing.