Awww, this gave me feelliinggggsss. I loved it :) What a beautifully touching story about Loki being humbled, if only for a little while. If only this were canon and that he'd remember his experiences and be changed for the better because of it. That would be nice. Thanks for sharing :)

Oh my god. That was incredible.

This was so amazing! I loved it!

I cannot accurately express how much I LOVED THIS. Here I am giggling like an idiot at 2:00 am, while I try not to fangirl squeal so loudly that I wake up my family.

THIS

This was adorable, and so nicely written! Well done! I enjoyed this very much.

Jane

I like the perspective how loki so thing and being stuborn in beginning such as figuring out what wrong with him till he is in too much pain that he call out to His brother or seek help from enemy either to end his life/ relief from the pain.

Luv protective/ nurture!avenger

I like it. Another!

Very enjoyable, thank you for the story! I especially liked the scene where Loki's desperately trying not to sneeze (because we have ALL been in that situation) and then not only sneezes but makes himself look terribly sick in he process. It felt a little slow after Loki started eating, as if getting the Avengers to acknowledge that he was sick was the climax and everything after that, including his disappearance, was just falling action. I like your vocabulary as well; had to search for some of them, which is always a good thing when reading. So thank you again for the story, and keep writing!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I love your voice! It's so...unintentionally...HILAROUS!

This was really good! I usually ignore stories about Loki because he's the least interesting to me and he often becomes kind of a Mary Sue, but this was so well done! Even at the beginning when there was hardly any dialogue, it held my interest. The "state of high piss-off" and his desire to tear the books to shreds...and then tear the SHREDS to shreds made me laugh. Loved that you worked some bits of Norse mythology into the story. Comparing sick Loki to a cat was perfect! I'm a vet, and I have had to deal with a cat that refuses to eat on more than one occasion - it's unspeakably aggravating!

Bruce was fantastic. Loved the way he interacted with Loki. "Oh, you could have started talking days ago. We just didn't want you to." Well done!

Ohh, I loved this piece so much! So, so much :-) Heartwarming, really!

I enjoyed Loki's character through this, and the realistic turn of events (for a fictional story about superheroes) and I'm glad I got to read this. Very well done, and the ending seemed perfectly in place, a nice kind of cliffhanger. I'd actually like to know what happens after, and I think that marks a very good story indeed.

Sincerely, Raven T

You, good sir (or ma'am), are amazing. Write On!

Wow! Beautifully written and in-character all the way through. This definitely deserves more reviews.

This was awesome!

Loved it, I really likedhow you stayed true to Loki's character, a lot of other stories think he would just redeem himself and everything would be all happy again.

But I love how you portrayed him!

Gold star for you!

Great job on this story, I loved every bit of it!

I laughed so hard when Loki had his sneeze fit in front of Fury and Nat haha ;D

and your writing style was also very fun to read c: