i like it!

oh dear. thank you for this one shot! i'm grateful that your time traveler Cloud got an ending (and it was not long and unfinished like others). you are amazing!

Kyarghhh 3 I love itttt gwahhhh twit was purrfecttt

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I really like Cloud's attitude. He is a very likeable in this story. Thank you for sharing this story!

I love it! I especially love all of the surprises Sephiroth managed over Cloud

I am going to review all your fics! You are quite good in writing FF7 characters! Love the time-travel fic from Sephiroth's POV. But I found the fast forward a bit 'fast' in this one, maybe if you make more of the build up and have a short series (2 or 3 Chapters) would be great for this one! D

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As usual, very well done. I really enjoy reading your stories. My only suggestion is this:

While I understand Sephiroth's reasons for leaving Shinra (both in this and ToaK), the decision feels a bit sudden. I think your story would benefit if you lead up to it a bit more.

Like I said, I really like your stories. I am glad to hear you're working on ToaK, and that more will be forthcoming. You're a good author.

Keep writing!

GREAT! Love it!

That was a great one-shot.

oh man, keep all the story you make like this, and you have a fan

Very lovely story.

So, this is probably one of the few rare AC!Cloud time travel fics that I've read that actually had Sephiroth obediently and willingly abandon Shinra to follow Cloud! Haha.

But I really enjoyed reading this fic!

I like it.