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into the t goes

WOW it was like the movie Love Potion #9 ._~

Cute dude (I don't care if you're a girl)! This was super awesome and I loved it! :) 3

This story has been great fun - sorry haven't read it sooner.

cute short story honey. I laughed reading that all the team went after Derek as well! LOL. Great job.

Love the story there KLCM, there was a little evilness with people pushing her out and Derek being a pansy and not pulling her back at the time, but as always it righted itself and ends in a lovely fashion.

I loved how the first chapter was all about Derek and his wants and feelings and this last one was about Penelope's then morphed into the pair coming together. Enjoyed the interactions with the team and their convos. Awesome story thanks for creating and sharing with us!

aw, that was such a sweet ending! I loved it! Derek and Penelope were so romantic when he confessed his feelings. My favorite line was when he said he wanted his haven to be his.

I FREAKIN' LOVE YOU! Brilliant, amazing, stunning... I'm lost for words! Thank you!

I love the ending, they are so made for each other.

Yay! It all worked out! The team's reaction was especially funny. And the part with Derek fighting for Penelope was sweet. Great ending! :)

Nicely done! Now to have Pen ruin Kevin's credit and reputation, and Morgan (and perhaps Rossi the Godfather!) have a "talk" with him! :-)

Oh yeah, Oh yeah, soooooo loved this story and I loved how Pen said, that the only spell Derek was going to be under was hers.

cute story