"I have lost my better half. To closed eyes and a ghost of a smile."

That is so great. The first few lines really got me, and kept me reading to the end. The rest of the story did not disappoint, but it could have been longer. You could have written stuff about what happened during them growing up, unforgettable memories. George has always kind of been in the shadow of Fred because it's Fred who thinks up all the ideas, and George is always there to back him up, so when Fred is gone, it's like...well, complete and utter shock because he has no one to rely on.

Great one-shot, love the twins, they're some of my fav characters and this portrayed how i imagine George would have felt so well!

I really loved it! I really felt the emotion that you were trying to give out! Keep on writing you here!

This is beautiful, it made me tear a little. Poor George. Great job with this short yet very beautiful one-shot.