You're not going to finish this, are you?

I like the story, really.

And I'm curious bout where the story goes.

Cheers

Excellent fanfiction you've got so far. Probably one of the only ones I've really been 'excited' to get to the next chapter in. I feel kind of dissapointed that this hasn't been updated in years... I'm really hoping one day you'll finish this, although I doubt it. The story is great, none-the-less.

Ah, wonderfully written piece, this. I don't think I've ever come across ANYTHING that was so bloody good and addictive...ever! Characters are IC, and more so than anything else, your manner of descriptions are mind-blowing and the story itself...the way it runs and meanders just knocks me off my feet! I really appreciate this! This is what FF should be about! Absolutely marvellous. I didn't find anything remotely off putting about it, and for that, I'm glad. Have you ever written before-in school, elsewhere? Because I mean, this is...really, really a significant fic. Keep up the good work, eh?

Do you have any idea of the pain you're making me feel.

The story is just great.

Update soon.

Kisses.

Lena Hiyasaki.

I find it strangely fitting that the style isn't anything extremely complicated-it feels simple and that's what makes it work. Everything feels depressing and painful. It's obvious there's something there without paragraphs dancing around that. *sigh* It makes me want more. ;_;

Hey,

I'd just like to say that this story is excellent. It's one of the most skillfully written pieces that I've read on this site. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chappie :-)

Hmm...

I like it.

I like it a lot.

Favorites and Author Alert, go you!

I'm very choosy about my favorite stories, y'know, so be happy you made my list!

Update soon!

OK, now I'm confused...

Does KAiba like Jounouchi? Is that it?

I need to reread it, didn't you say something like that at the note at the beginning?

whoa.

neat.

I'm likin' it!

oh...

mwahaha...

evil cliffies...

um... um...

what the hell?

I'm really looking forward to reading the rest. Hope it comes soon.

hm. this is kinda interesting. been a while since you up dated. but kewl non-the less. hopefully you'll up date sooner than later

It started off with reading your article, and enjoying the sense of humor within it, but I've finally come around to looking you up, and I must say...I really should have done so earlier. I love this fanfiction beyond words; however, I shall attempt to use my pathetic vocabulary to give you a relative idea, the faintest brushing upon how greatly I respect your ability.

Your vocabulary was descriptive and tless

...you really ought to continue this. It would be appriciated. Drop me an e-mail if you find the time, I enjoy your writing and I really do love this story. Shame it's never been finished. As I said, you should consider it.

Signed,

*~BrOkEnInFiNtY-CiTy'SaRmAgEdDoN...