This was a great way to show Chi-Chi's opinions about Goku's many transformations. I especially liked the conversation that Videl had with Goku. She certainly put things into perspective for Goku.

Pretty good i wonder if there will be God forms too?

Amazing! I loved the super saiyan 2 on especially. I hope you'd write more ride like this._

ssg and ssgss

My heart...so sweet. Beautiful...I cried...you really cought Chi-Chi's chacter. I loved it

Very true, I wish if only Akira would draw that kiss in the cell saga and and and oh my god I'm just like bro!

Very good! I loved fic

hey now they are super-saiyan gods and super-saiyan blue so update this story to include those forms they're even more insane than 4

I didn't know goku had a talking donut...

Performance in the writing is good, on the other thought, you might want to be a little less on saying what the character is doing and focus on just leave it as if you wrote the sound of her back leaning into the counter. On the over-all focus of this chapter it was pretty good. Thank you. Please keep on working hard to focus on better challenging yourself everyday so you can keep on developing your characters, the stage setting, the uniqueness of the story. "You can do anything, just not everything!"
"No human is perfect we all make mistakes each day and the only way we can get better improvement is to learn from those mistakes each day so we can be at our very best as often as we can. Good Luck and you got what it takes to be a writer. Enjoy! Keep on practicing your motor skills. Writing is counted as one of the most important motor skills everyone must learn throughout there lives. You possess a strong motor skill development with the ability to keep on developing that motor skill with each practice. Keep up with the great work you got this going for you. Thank you for sharing you excellent work.

Another fanfiction writer of quality! There are a few goku x chichi authors out there, and it pleases me to find another of there numbers. My fave dbz couple is of course gcc.

lol some of it was very funny

I love this...Goku's SS4 form is much more interesting than his other forms but I love them all the you have to admire Goku that he would gladly respond to his promises and their happiness.:D

Aw poor Chi!...a never ending cycle...lol a caveman with no eyebrows...aw man Goku!:)

Oh boy...this was unbelievably hilarious!..Goku cut off the power with his power...how ironic..and Chi was mad as ever for him preventing her from doing her regular duty, but Goku tried to change her mind with romance. Piccolo found this...plain weird..lol!:D