Reviews for The Showers
Snarry4life chapter 1 . 5/31
Good lord I needed this!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5
DISGUSTANG PEDOPHILIA
Beefuf chapter 1 . 3/2/2019
Oooh. Loved this bit of fluff!
Susanne chapter 1 . 1/6/2019
I love it. I think I need a hot shower now
HermioneSnape1983 chapter 1 . 9/20/2018
If the girls bathroom is not inaccessible to preeves then how come preeves is in hermione bathroom?
twlightbella chapter 1 . 5/18/2018
They had sex in the bathroom
Silver Orbed Lioness chapter 1 . 4/4/2018
That was soooooo cool! (And realllllly hot!), I really enjoyed that one shot of my OTP!
PixieGirl chapter 1 . 7/4/2017
This is one of my favorite fanfictions, and I always bring myself to a climax when reading it XD.
Blue night fairy chapter 1 . 8/11/2015
Nice story!
iron-on-maiden chapter 1 . 4/12/2015
Yes, quite improbable. But loved it anyway!
FlamingForest chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
like
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2014
My only suggestion is to take out the author's note in the middle the "(if you'll forgive the pun)" note. You get sucked into the story and then it's ruined by the note. Other than that, I can't find any complaint. Hot story. Definitely will be what I think about tonight. ;-)
FutureMrsSnape chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
VERY good story! One suggestion is to never put author's notes in the middle of the story. If you take that part out, about the pun, then it will flow much more smoothly. You get lost in the story and then an author's note pops up and you remember that it's just a story, so it ruins it a bit. But with that in there, bravo!
HermisLupim26 chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
mui quente e linda
404 Account Removed chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
That was great! Loved this fic :D
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