Reviews for The Showers |
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Snarry4life chapter 1 . 5/31 Good lord I needed this! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5 DISGUSTANG PEDOPHILIA |
Beefuf chapter 1 . 3/2/2019 Oooh. Loved this bit of fluff! |
Susanne chapter 1 . 1/6/2019 I love it. I think I need a hot shower now |
HermioneSnape1983 chapter 1 . 9/20/2018 If the girls bathroom is not inaccessible to preeves then how come preeves is in hermione bathroom? |
twlightbella chapter 1 . 5/18/2018 They had sex in the bathroom |
Silver Orbed Lioness chapter 1 . 4/4/2018 That was soooooo cool! (And realllllly hot!), I really enjoyed that one shot of my OTP! |
PixieGirl chapter 1 . 7/4/2017 This is one of my favorite fanfictions, and I always bring myself to a climax when reading it XD. |
Blue night fairy chapter 1 . 8/11/2015 Nice story! |
iron-on-maiden chapter 1 . 4/12/2015 Yes, quite improbable. But loved it anyway! |
FlamingForest chapter 1 . 10/13/2014 like |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2014 My only suggestion is to take out the author's note in the middle the "(if you'll forgive the pun)" note. You get sucked into the story and then it's ruined by the note. Other than that, I can't find any complaint. Hot story. Definitely will be what I think about tonight. ;-) |
FutureMrsSnape chapter 1 . 3/28/2014 VERY good story! One suggestion is to never put author's notes in the middle of the story. If you take that part out, about the pun, then it will flow much more smoothly. You get lost in the story and then an author's note pops up and you remember that it's just a story, so it ruins it a bit. But with that in there, bravo! |
HermisLupim26 chapter 1 . 10/9/2013 mui quente e linda |
404 Account Removed chapter 1 . 2/24/2013 That was great! Loved this fic :D |