Reviews for The Challenge |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG, I love it so much! I am also an idiot though...I clicked on this fic and I thought it said, like, 10 chapters or something, and then I realised I was not wearing my reading glasses and that it was one really long chapter! I love this fic! It's near midnight for...oooh, so tired. *rubs eyes and tries to calm her fangirling about all the kisses* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, this one is hard to believe there isn't going to be more. How could this end with such a Challenge! It could be a very interesting story all in it's self. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this one too! And once again I am wishing there was more to it. Good stuff! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you wrote their conversations XD I This story was funny :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, don't hate yourself for writting this! It's really a nice read I'm when bored or just want a long one-shot! XDD Great job! (d).(b) |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, it is long, but their last conversation is so worth it. so, well done, keep it up. and yea, man, fuck college. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like their banters towards the end. And I like how Kanda is all "DUN WANNA" at the idea of a relationship. Or even at the idea of caring for each other BUT HE DOES CARE THE DORK *cough*. Anyway, enjoyed it a lot so Imma fave it :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahaha. your author note is hilarious! although i understand what you mean. . Nonetheless, i just love it! especially that part when the train stop and Kanda sidestep out of the way and then Allen land on his face. hahahaha. hilarious moment! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really nico long one shot :) their arguments & kisses are random but cute as well. Hope they would make their relationship deeper. And plz make another yullen |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good. Thought you captured kanda perfectly. Pity you won't continue it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this really a one shot? If I requested, would you continue? Please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha yeah! That was good... You write some brillant stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL, everything turns into a pissing contest with these 2. You should write a part 2 if you get a chance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was plenty good! It was interesting and the pacing was good and I just love the way you wrote Allen and Kanda here (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, what an awesome story! :D They are just so cute together! Great job! |