Another stupid crap, unfinish.

Your spelling suck, your dead story suck, your AN suck and finally you suck

lmao! This is great wish there was more :)

I suppose it is useless to ask if you're going to finish this story after seven years, but I'm asking anyway. ARE you going to finish it? I agree it has been dormant for a long time; but other writers have taken up their abandoned stories after equally long hiatuses. Please consider it.

The Twins asked Harry the following: "... is it true that the two of you made fun of his dress in the great hall?"

I don't like Harry making fun of Ron's clothing, even if Ron is a major PITA. It is bullying, and it is beneath Harry. A lot of Ron's insecurities come from never having new things, and this is an issue to which Harry can relate. Ron is not a favorite character of mine, but I really don't want Harry to bully or make fun of him over such things. Taking the high road leaves Harry the better person in their confrontations.

I loved Harry and Hermione's handling of Dumbledore.

Regarding your AN ... Unless you're changing canon - which is perfectly acceptable, btw, as long as you let us know you're "going AU on us" - Percy graduated at the end of Ginny's second year and was completely estranged from his family by Ginny's fourth year. When would he have helped her brew the potions she fed to Harry in his sixth year? As for Ron brewing potions ... I say it's a wonder he didn't kill Hermione, given his abysmal potions "skills," Molly's assistance notwithstanding. I would be less surprised to learn Dumbledore and Snape were handling it during the school year.
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Ron got up and started ranting, "What the hell? I mean what the bloody hell? First you don't speak to me for weeks, then when I'm finally ready to talk to you and apologize for not believing you about the goblet, you turn up and kiss her? She was mine and-"

Ron's rant in the dorm room was certainly self-centered. As I recall, he's the one who precipitated the breach in their friendship. Now that he's finally decided to offer some sort of lame "un-apology," he thinks Harry should be there waiting, at his beck and call. As for the "she is mine" comment - I think he deserves one of Hermione's nose punches! Someone is a bit "entitled"! Or, rather, he thinks he is.

Fun story. Wish there was more.

Damn, Harry is being a lazy sod. Letting the memories do all the explaining. He hasn't explained a thing to her yet.

I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update.

I think the few months hiatus became a few years. I have enjoyed some of the characterizations and was hoping there was more to this story.

I like this beginning.

One plot discontinuity so far: Harry suggests taking Hermione's memories back, and Joanne then has to verify it is possible by reading the contract and calls him a genius. Next: Jerry pays of a bet where Joanne says explains she bet him he would do what she obviously did not expect him to do in the earlier scene. For continuity, Joanne either needs to Not re-read the contract and immediately call Jerry, or the bet needs to be something different. (I hope I am not reiterating someone else's critique.)

I am looking forward to reading the next few chapters.

Looking forward to harry ending his friendshipwith ron

So cool

In Scotland the legal marriage age is 16 with parents consent but since harry has no parents I don't know how that would work for him.

Love story so far hope to see more soon