Interesting, if has a lot of potential. I would love to see more chapters be released in the future.

When is the rest coming? This is good

Hmm interesting. If u have pairings I think it should be Sasuke,Ino,and Sakura. I don't like Hinata well the pairing that is. And in the future when they get older the three girls will have Naruto's Children. Sakura can have a son name Shippo and can look just like the Shippo in Inuyasha with Auborn hair and green eyes. Th rest is up to you.

good fic even if it's slow on the updates

NO. NO. NO!
You are insulting the original by calling this a rewrite!
It was suppose to have Naruto being a badass, home hidden behind a waterfall, Naruto does the bloobclone jutsu to ger his mother out of the seal, Naruto single handedly passing the test for the team, Ino being a fan-girl enslaves herself to Naruto.

Also the fight scenes were too short and it is far too close to cannon. You left out the filler chapters. You also left out the bashing, ritches female fury does not count.

This is not a rewrite. This is a Naruto story with half-demons. You should change the title to something else and change the summary to say half-demons instead of saying it's a rewrite.

One, if you are going to have a fem-sasuke you should have named her Sasuki. By keeping her name Sasuke you make me think she is a he.
Two, why are Sakura and Ino half demons and not fan-girls? Seriously they are Suppose to be delusional fan-girls. Where is the bashing?!
And isn't Sasuki's mom suppose to be dead?

I am flaming because I care.

The original is one of my favorite stories, you better do it good.

Can naruto figure out how to unseal his mother. Can Haku be one of naruto's mates or brother ? Are you having Karin Uzumaki join naruto instead of Snake Sannin

Yeah, cuz Obama gives a damn what the people actually want or think. What you really need to do is call your senators and representatives and tell them.

I like the story so far, however I do have a suggestion to make. Since Sasuke in this story is a female, it would be best to change the name to something better. Like Satsuki or something that would be a better female name.

Very interesting story so far. I look forward to seeing how the Wave arc unfolds.

have him turn into something like a, i dont know , 9 tailed fox or something...*pouting face activated*

Please keep writing, I'm looking forward to the next update!

It is spelled Chakra(Cha-kra) not Charka(Char-ka)

Please proof-read! Some of your sentences are missing words or you just outright mis-spelled them! Your story is good dont't get me wrong, but your grammar, and spelling (sharringan?; no it is spelled Sharingan) you have to be at least 100% with spelling. I also noticed that some of of your Japanese words are also misspelled as a student of that language that is an eyesore. Please double check even triple check your work before posting. It's your masterpiece take pride in it and only give us readers your God honest best!