Reviews for Five Loaves of Bread: Upside Down Cake
bye123456789 chapter 1 . 4/26
holy shit.

does katniss still? volunteer ? oh my god
Loti-miko chapter 1 . 4/6
I fucking love how you ended the story. I fucking loved it.

Clear enough to know what happened yet brief enough to feel powerful and intense.

This was fucking genius. I loved it!
BS-Annie chapter 1 . 3/30
I love it! Please write a sequel. You are amazing.
UnluckyAmulet chapter 1 . 4/30/2019
I was intruiged by an AU like this and I'm glad I found this story! I admit I kept getting confused over which woman was meant to be Katniss's original mother, Larkspur or Mahra, but I guess it doesn't really matter since both Katniss and Peeta's mothers are pretty unimportant in the series anyway. But this was a fun exploration of how one difference to the story changes things. The little details in this are so good - goat's cheese dissolving on her tongue, a sweater instead of burnt bread. I love all the little parallels to the games too - the nightlock berries, Peat fighting Tate like Thresh fighting Clove, Annie drowning instead of winning her games. Madge was a good supporting character too, it was nice to see a little focus put on her. And BAKING INNUENDO! I wonder if the girl Tribute called would change, or if it would still be Katna who volunteered?

Epic Otaku Cherry chapter 1 . 3/5/2019
Every single one of these is brilliant, I hope you know that
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2018
Beautifully written
miisfxrtune chapter 1 . 12/12/2017
curiousitykills314 chapter 1 . 8/10/2017
Please, please, please write a sequel to this. I really want to see how this new Hunger Games turns out and it's aftermath.
Gammily chapter 1 . 9/11/2016
This is my new fave AU. I really want more from this storyline. Love it so much!
OnceABlueMoon chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
Okay. I'm crying. This... This is so beautiful and sad and emotional!
Lizardphobia chapter 1 . 5/25/2016
Goosebumps. I loved this to freaking bits.
5livelaughlove5 chapter 1 . 5/3/2016
Still amazing
inside padme's wardrobe chapter 1 . 2/9/2016
I love your Toast series. The different parts are so original and fascinating. Your stories have the same flavor of the dystopian world of Panem but the changes you make place the characters in new and interesting predicaments. And you still manage to keep the bits and pieces that keep Katniss and Peeta themselves. I know you're probably not likely to continue this, but if you have the inspiration to I'd love to read it (and I'm sure many others would as well). This is a great installment. Really well done!
arisapphyre chapter 1 . 12/15/2015
This was so amazing I can't even find the words to describe it... I mean, aside from the awesome writing, the amount of detail and thought put into this was just... Wow.
Olivia chapter 1 . 12/5/2015
I would love a sequel. This was amazing and I want more!
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