I know this is old, but I wanted to leave my compliments on this fic as it was so remarkably hot and steamy. As much as I would have loved a NSFW continuation, it's perfectly fine being left as is and I could reread it a hundred times and still let my imagination run wild with what could happen, so excellent job!

that was great, i can totally see nami 'trying' to rob law, that's so her.
and i think it can stand alone as it is!

Dear fucking GOD! Never have I been so utterly unnerved, on edge, hot and bothered, and scared shitless by Law before! And definitely not from a one-shot! Usually it takes a couple creepy chapters to really freak me the fuck out.

This... Oh no, this had my heart pounding straight from the get-go!

YIKES! This story! Holy shit! It was chilling and hair-rising and suspenseful as hell, and I think I even started panting like a damn dog from the adrenaline. Don't even get me started on how sexy it was too! God lord, I need a cold shower!

I honestly questioned Nami's sanity the entire time then when I figured it was a fucking dare... A FUCKING DARE! I just straight up had a spazz attack mixed with an anxiety attack mixed with a sugar rush. Yup, I was THAT far gone. Lol!

Law here was a sexy beast. An intimidating, sexy beast. I felt the urge to jump him at times then I felt like crying in fear followed by the intense urge to hide under a blanket and cover my eyes.

Because, c'mon ladies, it's Law. He's so hot it's terrifying. And you pulled him off perfectly! Actually, I'm fucking addicted to how you write Law.

Hope to see more from you! You're talented as hell! XD

I love it

To your P.S.: Yes. Noticed that too.

That was a GREAT piece of work - and totally in character. Yes, you shouldn't mess with certain people, but you shouldn't underestimate a good thief, too.
All the time reading I was wondering why Nami did this. Out of her comfort zone, but why? A dare, and a drunken one. And one that fits Nami perfectly.
I really enjouyed reading how she was trying to play him, just to be played back, and how in the end it was nevertheless her who succeeded.

No sequel, eh? That's a shame. I'm sure Law would like his wallet back. :)

This was a fun read. Thank you for posting it.

A mature content will be nice (? haha! I love it

god that was sexy o_o love this lawna one shot !

So sexy XD This is one of the best LawNa one shots like for real. It's awesome, and I encourage you to continue to write more of this pairing.

I remembered this story from ages ago, it was one of my favs in terms of atmosphere are just... sexiness. Was looking for it today, and there was a good ten minutes where I thought it was deleted! Nearly cried! Thoroughly enjoyed rereading it. Don't know what it is about this scene but it's so hot.

Hohohohoooooooho she WON XD
this is you first OP and without knowing who Law is! GOSH you're GOO though it would have been nice to read more I get how you're thinking
AAAhhh how stupid he'd feel the next morning XP

THANK U! LOVE IT!

This is my favourite oneshot in the fandom crack pairing. It makes me literally lightheaded with giddiness everytime I read this. Love this to bits! You have no idea how perfectly in sync these two characters are the way you write them and I can't gush enough without exploding my jugular vessel.

Considering how you had to look up who Law was, you did a FANTASTIC job with him. His character was spot on, even if he had been "drunk". Very, very good job on that. I hope to see more LawNa from you. You write marvelously. :)

Wow...
Im a spanish girl (so probably I dont write very well) but I need to say you that this was an awesome story, very hot and, may be I cant understand everything, but I like it a lot!
P.D: Im the number 70! hahahaha

Omg, omg, omg!

You have to write a sequel!