Reviews for Their first
deactivated.account.2015 chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
Even though this is short, your writings really good! I don't usually like k stuff but this one was real good :)
CrazyPeanutAttack chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Sniffle. That was beautiful.
Cammie Cassia Chase chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Hi! I saw you reviewed May's Tratie story, so I thought I'd check your profile... sorry if I sound like a stalker. I love it! I'm kinda sad about the whole him not living thing, but I still love it. Keep writing!

-Cam
mumblealice17 chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Awww! You have a very unique style of writing :) It sounds as though you write from experience ;) well done!
Leelo Forever chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
hey! ...7abet ktir! (haha saw your bio w ana lubnaniyye kamen) great job. bittersweet.
MichelleTheVampGirl chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
this is really really good!

Jow you managed to pack so much emotion into such a small piece, I highly commend you on that! The wording was beautiful, and I like how it showed both sides of their feelings instead of just one, so that was interesting to read, and the way their thoughts mirrored each other was touching.

Again, great job! :D
americanlebanese chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
This is really, really good! I wish to read more from you.. Very touching and emotional. Can't wait for more from you, leblover!

-Chris(tian) :D
BroadwayFanGirl91 chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
HE DIED! WAAAAaaaaaaa! Well, anyway very well written. Congrates!
Punzie the Platypus chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
You let him die! Sad *Sniffs* Not bad for first FanFic.
fryingpanninja107 chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
this was really good!