Well done! I enjoyed your story. Although Margaret came across as selfish many times, the author didn't shy away from Margaret facing consequences. The author even had Margaret truly apologizing, most writers only have the man to apologize (even if they weren't at fault, I guess that's suppose to make them more romantic...idk). I found it a refreshing change.

Excellent story and writing so far, but why is Margaret so immature. Ugh!

Gulp - well, this is eerily relevant now. Well written "page" turner!

Lovely reading

Chocolate brown diamond?

What a wonderful story. Thanks for posting.

Where’s the epilogue?

Great story BUT the rape scene ruined it for me. What was the point of it? What purpose did serve? It was unnecessary and I think whenever you are revising this wonderful story cut that scene and you will be left with an amazing story.

Thank you for this wonderful story!

It's so bful i loved it wish.

2nd time to read. :) I missed Dixon though

Just wonderful, thank you!

Am I missing something? How is this rated K? Very graphic scenes that are unexpected for a story rated ages 5, give your readers some warning about all the death and sexual violence or change your rating.

What a sweet moment they shared! I like how they are slowly coming together so naturally.

This is very well written. Looking forward to the rest.