Ally is an idiot. A criminally negligent idiot.

I find it very annoying when characters start blaming themselves for things they had no control over. Like Harry blaming himself for Cedric's death when he had nothing to do with it. It false and its overuse in stories has made it very grating on the nerves.

But here, Ally is definitely to blame for all the people she could have saved due to her foreknowledge but simply decided not to. Why the hell did she let death eaters attack Hogwarts? Why did she not drop an anonymous message to Dumbledore to be careful about the trap on the ring horcrux? If it's because "making too many changes would make her foreknowledge useless", I say not using her foreknowledge is what would make her foreknowledge useless.

Oh and one exceptionally infuriating part. Why does she "have to let Mad-Eye die"? But she's free to save Hedwig because "that's just the way I am"? She couldn't have saved both?

Ally, you're a piece of shit. You do NOT deserve a happy ending.

Also, there has been a steady decline in the quality of the story. It was fantastic at the start with proper pacing and world-building and dialogue. And then things started jumping around like it was a rough draft instead of a finished chapter and grammatical errors started popping up everywhere. Did two people write this? Or did your beta quit halfway through?

i love this story and im so thankful i found it im crying it was so beautiful all of it

I absolutely love this story! I laughed and cried throughout the whole book you should definitely write more Harry Potter fan fictions you are amazing at it xx

Wow! This story is so perfect! I was in tears several times, throughout the story.
I really Ally, she is a great OC! I love how she finally killed Charles, and then took over his coven! It added a great subplot to the end.

But again, great story!

Ive read this story so many times and still love it

I like your pairings...but Ally's feelings kinda just sprang up and I feel like we should have had some of the hints that Seamus mentioned, but Ally's still oblivious to her feelings of course. It was kinda a 180 for her personality to me that I felt I had to make this comment. Otherwise, I've been loving your fanfic!

The last two days I was reading your story nonstop till the end. This is absolutely amazing.

That story was absolutely amazing. One of the best fanfics I've read and I've got a feeling this won't be the last time I read it. The plot itself is absoultely amazing and I love Ally's character. I love that the story was perfectly balanced with happy and sad moments. During the Potter Party I was in fits of laughter and When Alyssa broke up with Fred I had tears streaming down my face, same for when Fred and Sirius 'died'. I also love the chapter title 'The Liar, The Bitch and The Wardrobe. I love this story so much, you should be proud.

absolutely beautiful. i loved the happy ending

Stopped reading before I got to the end of the first chapter. From the opening paragraph every word screams Mary Sue. Do you know what is wrong with a character being a Mary Sue? You can't possibly relate to a miss perfect, 'cause no one is perfect. But hush about that, it's a secret, don't spread it around XD

I really love your story! So much that I finished it all in one day (surprise,surprise)
I felt several different kinds of emotions while reading this story. I'm so glad Ally took the chance to save people as much as she can and at the same time feeling humane, unlike other fanfics that shows either only the strongest or only the weakest part of the protagonist's character. Ally have both and she earned that happy ending. Thank god she's not a Mary Sue or a complete dolt coward wimp. She's balanced and I love her I hope you'll be able to read this, I'm still waiting for that epilogue

Bittersweet cause I just spent the past 9 hours reading the entire thing (I read at a pace that my eyes are like processing it into images and I'm just basically watching a movie of it in my mind)

I want more but I'm so happy of how it turned out

I'm not going to pretend like this story was in my heart from the very beginning because it wasn't. I hated the drama at first, but eventually, it grew on me. I honestly cannot thank you enough for giving me this experience, I really can't. I'm stunned, sad that it's over, and happy all at the same time! I love the character ark for Scaboir, it was absolutely genius! I very much enjoyed this story and I look forward to possibly reading some of your other works in the future. :) Don't be a stranger! XP

First time reading it! Ya a lot of typos hahahah but it's okay~ cos it's still understandable XD you're funny~

Thank you for the most amazing harry potter fanfiction experience!