| Reviews for The Underground |
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  Romulus chapter 1 . 8/26 This and the original may as well have been written by some edgy 14 year old. One who would do well to reread the books and maybe take a writing course. Otherwise, the same old tropes can be found strewn across the site. |
 4597boss chapter 4 . 6/5 I love this, but who they were before would be nice to know. |
| AARaven14 chapter 4 . 5/10 ahem! Where are the rest? |
| Bronze chapter 4 . 4/9 Well, it was interesting while lasted. I think I'll read Rebels of Fortune next and compare them. Though it's a shame this died. I'd've really liked to've read more. It's not the usual WBWL type story. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/26/2017 Remus feels the first line drawn onto his cheek. Correction: Remus FELT the first line drawn onto his cheek. TO make it sound better: Remus felt the first line taint his cheek black. (or something whatever ink sevvie is using) (I know you mentioned that your grammer isn't very good but please edit your work.) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/26/2017 Firstly, I love your story! I can literally smell goody good ol' potentialll leaking off from this fic! It's really good so far, but damn those favs don't seem to be getting up eh? First things first, I would like it if you changed the rules for the Underground. Make it rhyme or something? Like how Gringott's poem really expresses its sincerity and its warning to those wanting to steal from vaults? Because I'm sorry to say this but I usually skip your Prologue and head on straight to the main Chapter. I think making the rules of the Underground rhyme a bit and have it express Herpy Derpy's (harry potter) own past would be really cool. Anyways, love the fic so far and I know that there's a lot of reviews and comments wishing for this to continue but... PLEASE CONTINUE! seldoot |
| alessia3922 chapter 4 . 5/8/2017 Love your story. Plz update soon |
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/24/2017 Great potential, hope you continued this fic. |
| Corporalshort chapter 4 . 1/29/2017 Please update! I love this fic! |
| orphanedacount chapter 4 . 10/27/2016 I love this |
| ThaleiaEuphrosyneEveningshade chapter 4 . 7/12/2016 PLEASE UPDATE |
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/29/2015 This is good please update |
| rhizz17 chapter 4 . 11/2/2015 update please |
| FoalsAreCute chapter 4 . 10/1/2015 Pls update I read your previous story and I really enjoyed it and it would be really good to see the rest of this story so pls update. |
| Laesk chapter 4 . 7/16/2015 interesting but if you are doing a rewrite you may like to add more. I hope to be reading more soon. thank you for sharing this. gonna try the other story like this now |
