Wow...I never really thought of Crow as the scared, timid type, only as the sneaky theif and trickster. You really write a good story.

That Snead an awesome and great story about stuff I didn't even I didn't know! please write more!

I love this story. You're a really talented writer. I love the concern that Yusei has for his friends, and the 'rivalry' between Jack and Crow. Good story!

There were a few grammatical mistakes, but other than that it was good. It was a little confusing for me at first when you used Kiryu's English name while also using Team Satisfaction instead of the Enforcers. I wanted to reply to a few of your messages, so is there any way you can open your profile to messages?

AW! :) A sweet touching beautiful reunion! :D I hope you update soon! :D I love this! :)

OH NO! CROW GOT CAUGHT! :O MAKE A RUN FOR IT CROW! :D

YES people like this story! :) Personally I love it! :) And I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

I really am enjoying reading this. You are doing a good job in writing your own ideas, while still making it cannon. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Quick question: was the duel against the gang the one in the anime where Yusei was pulled off the building?

I hope things get better for poor Crow! :)

I love this story. I think it's a great addition to the last one. Crow is such an underdeveloped character. We know nothing about his childhood other than he lived in the streets for a while before moving into Martha's. I have no idea why no one is reviewing this, maybe you can try changing the summary.

cool I am a crowfanand very impressed cant wait till next chapter good luck well done ;);)

I am glad you're writing a new story. I love that you're Crow's side of the story, he doesn't have many fanfics. I do want to point out that you changed Crow's age, he was nine in Meant to Be and he is ten here, I don't know if you did that purposefully or not. Your grammar and phrasing has really improved too.