I absolutely love your writing especially this storie! Please write more!

This is a perfect X ray of what really happens among them! I would really love to see Ten lies Duncan told to Courtney! I know things went off with them at TDAS... but Duncan still was obssesed with the girl! Please, Ten lies Duncan told to Courtney!

MAKE A STORY BOUT DIS ONE 2

u should mak a story about the cirgerrtes one sorry cant spell all to good

kool

s/6693908/1/Scarred read my story please im a HUGE fan:),xxx

Aw, what a touching ending. I especially like how Duncan is really affected by that phrase and how in this one she admits that's a lie in no time. Nice job! And I think that idea for a sequel sounds great, go for it!

Haha, I'm surprised that Duncan was actually a camp counselor (Maybe he was forced to be by his parents as a punishment). To be honest, I was scared of a hook man: There was a short animation in Cartoon Network where they showed the classic urban legend of a couple making out in a car when the radio announces the hook man's out there, the girl's obviously scared but her boyfriend calms her down until she notices something shiny in the corner of her eye, order the guy to bolt, and when they're at the front of her house and he goes to open the car door of her side the hook's hanging there.

Nice job, I agree, this is one of the most obvious and famous lies Courtney said _U. Let's keep reading

love it, hope you do write a sequel.

you've never heard the original, then? the story Duncan actually told. i have. here it is:

"A teenage boy drove his date to a dark and deserted Lovers' Lane for a make-out session. After turning on the radio for mood music, he leaned over and began kissing the girl.

A short while later, the music suddenly stopped and an announcer's voice came on, warning in an urgent tone that a convicted murderer had just escaped from the state insane asylum — which happened to be located not far from Lovers' Lane — and that anyone who noticed a strange man lurking about with a hook in place of his right hand should immediately report his whereabouts to the police.

The girl became frightened and asked to be taken home. The boy, feeling bold, locked all the doors instead and, assuring his date they would be safe, attempted to kiss her again. She became frantic and pushed him away, insisting that they leave. Relenting, the boy peevishly jerked the car into gear and spun its wheels as he pulled out of the parking space.

When they arrived at the girl's house she got out of the car, and, reaching to close the door, began to scream uncontrollably. The boy ran to her side to see what was wrong and there, dangling from the door handle, was a bloody hook."

and i know that's the one he told because wikipedia says: "In the TV show Total Drama Island camper Duncan is seen telling the ending to the story to the remaining contestants on the show."

...and now you know

YES. YOU MAKE SEQUEL. NOW. /end rant. xD

i liked it. i really did. amazing job, mah dear. amazing job.

it's okay, court. we all know he scares you. he scares me too. xD

I always like these kind of oneshots where they share history together since they're kids *_*. Haha, and I think in that kind of AU is when Courtney's denial gets stronger: Knowing him for so long makes it more difficult for her to accept that she's in love with the guy she's known for so many years, no matter if he's a friend or foe _U. Let's go to the next chapter

Ah hahahaha! *Running in circles in the middle of a plushie rain*. OK, done with the madness, let's go to the review. I'm sorry your parents were giving you a hard moment, I hope everything's OK between you now. Wow, this one simply melted my heart! Liked a lot how he compares the different sides of Courtney and I was cooing with the end. I imagine him soothing her and I get all mushy *sob*. Let's check the next chapter

WII! *Squishing DuncanXCourtney plushies in a crazy fangirl deadly hug* Like Lindsay would say: "These dolls are SO cute!". I really thought the Princess Courtney/Beth doll was and wanted one of each XD.

Haha, yup, this isn't technically a lie but it was fun indeed, not to mention I LOVED the end. Rawr, really sexy *- w -*. Let's keep reading