Beautifully written, I only wish there was more! x

You know... I never like Sosa. Even in the movie she came across as very cold and ... it was as if she never cared or respected Face in the first place.

If you're with someone and they have family, you at least TRY to become apart of that family and, at least in this story, she didn't even bother trying.

I really liked this story. I liked what you did with it and how... they really seemed very much like a family. Because the way they are is how I've seen siblings act, you know? It's the way I am with my brother and mom.

Anyway, I really liked the story!

five stars!

-shadow

It has suddenly occured to me, on this dark morning that is technically in your past, that I had not reviewed this most fantastic piece of work.

This is my favorite. Usually I hesitate to label a "favorite" because there tend to be so many that vie for that top position (I think I can easily name my favorite fruit (lychees) but not my favorite movie or car). However, this story is my favorite. Love love love it.

It also has the honor of being one of the first A-Team stories I read when I started getting into the fandom. Imagine my delight when I realized you had more stories available, and they were just as incredible and lovely!

And I pimp this particular story out for you too . . . people ask, "Why do you read fanfiction?" and I open this up on the internet and answer, "This is why. Read it. Bask in its glory and wonderment, think of the possibilities it portends, and wish you could be as talented."

So! Long review is long and full of love. "Challenging the Paradigm" lychees.

Amen.

Few fanfics actually make me laugh out loud with their humor, but yours certainly did. Well gone! It was a good angle to take and I enjoyed it very much. Thanks!

Odd, but I liked it.

I so did not see that last line coming. This is great!

My fave gems from this chapter:

BA groaned. "I ain't sticking around if this is gonna be one of your crazy love-fests," he warned the Captain. "You got too many feelings. Keep 'em inside."

And the farting rainbows comment LOL

LOL wwoooowwww. Just, wow.

Also: Face's yell and "Several miles away, a startled camel raised its head." might be one of the funniest mental pictures ever.

I just got yelled at by the system from trying to review too fast. PSH.

Seriously, you have their voices DOWN. I can hear Cooper saying all these things - it's like watching a movie in my head. Bravo.

Rock Out With Your Cock Out. I need to see this hat on Hannibal, like now.

From what we learned about Sosa in the film, I agree that she would struggle with their unique 'dynamics' - have you SEEN the Wheel of Fortune episode where Murdock and Face jump around screaming and hugging like women? Yeah. So.

"I'll keep YOU inside," - a true Murdockian quip.

Face breaking down because of Murdock's love fest was adorable. I wish there were about fifty more chapters after this one because I could have gone all night with these. And I think every comedy should end with this: they could suck hairy monkey dick.

Perfect. I laughed out loud and will store that for later useage.

Thanks for the fantastic fic and I can't wait to read more of your work _

I hope you don't mind my assault on your inbox and the probable future assault on your LJ - I just can't help myself, I need to praise your fantabulousness.

This, I think, was my favorite one. You do a great Sosa and she is very hard to do. I want to see more of her concerning group dynamics, how she reacts to the boys and their very hugely gay bromance with each other.

The conversation about 'i love you' was delightful. I can hear her flat tone being like, seriously, i love you ... to your team mates ... every phone call ...

And Face being all no, no, that's gay when you say it that way.

You are making my day so complete.

There are SO many things I want to paste into this review but it will take up time and space...EFF IT:

"It wasn't fake tan, it was tanning OIL," Oh Face...of course he would say this ( you write spot on movie!A-Team)

"Things don't stop existing just because you don't notice them," - Exactly why I LOVE your Murdock...

"A toothbrush is way easier to replace than a new shirt. If anything, toothbrush balls is letting you off lightly." - is it weird that I agree 100%?

This had me giggling like no other. I love Face and Murdock together because they have (and had in the show) the most EPIC bromance ever and you captured them with absolute perfection.

Best. Last. Sentence. EVER. This wis all sorts of adorable. Picturing all these things had me weak at the knees and whibbling like a baby. BA pulling a Face's waistband, towel retaliation, Hannibal in Murdock's hat, Murdock drawing all over Face ... I can't even * head explodes*

Another fantastic fic - after this I'm heading over to LJ ... Clearly, I have missed to much awesomeness

That was very sweet. Loved every moment of it.

Fart it BA! Fart it up!

I wanna see you poop sparkly rainbows in a field of sunshine and flowers! _!

lololololololololol!

I love you! :D! I love your camel too!

I love it to bits, please continue asap.

yours insanely

Gollumfryingeggs

I am SO glad I discovered this fic. Because really it was lovely and hilarious and was quite akwkard to read in a social situation (because when you burst out into a fit of giggles, you can't really give "balls on a toothbrush" as the reason why you're laughing :-)). All the team were written in character, especailly Hannibal (who I've always imagined as a long suffering kindergarten teacher when it comes to Face and Murdock's antics) and Murdock (who would DEFINITELY give out hugs regardless of social boundaries)

Thanks for writing