This is still brilliant on what must be my 6th read of it. Many thanks.

You use so few words to convey so much. This is perfect.

Beautifully written. Strong images, and great characterization. It's complete the way it is, but I certainly wouldn't mind reading about the others' days.

Poor Ianto - great story!

This is absolutely stunning!

Poignant, touching, very moving and Ianto's thoughts are so believable. I like Jack being there for Ianto in (almost) silent support.

Beautifully captured, it stands alone perfectly )

wow that was a brilliant one-shot. I love the way that you write, so keep at it! MC. x

awwww, that made me slightly sad but it was nice.

really nice!

I don't think Ianto would ever beleive that she died at CW, but it was a lovely little piece and i think it would be nice to see what the others would do for their day... hint!

I love it. Really really good. I kind of want you to leave it at that because it is so beautiful it deserves to stand on its own.

Very beautiful, the characters aree well spotted, the idea is moving ; not much else to say. It's a lovely way to make the transition between the despair he felt while mournig her, and the acceptance of her death.

When do you see this take place, exactly? During the second season, surely, but I actually wonder when Jack followed him here for the first time. I guess it took a certain time for Ianto to let him ...

And yes, if you have the time / motivation / inspiration, please write a day for each member : the idea is great, and even better than if it was just about Ianto. I highly wonder what Jack's day could be. When he became immortal?

Beautiful story, it really is. Heart-breakingly beautiful.

Oh! So beautiful! Really really liked your writing style for this one, you adapted it with so much skill for the one-shot-ness! :) And as proud as I am of you for writing a one-shot - I would HEART a 'day' for each of them! :D:D:D That has so much potential, and hey, they could still be called one-shots, a collection of one-shots :D