this was cute, i ship zadr , screw people who dislike.

pleeease write more?

Well, well. I have seen you reading my HP/LV story, so I got curious. You are a good writer; you just have a few errors here and there. Not too many. I do the same thing ;)

you spelled other like 'pther'.

Omg I love fanfics like this that end in a dream it's so awesome good job :)

lol XD omg i loved this gotta enjoy the shared wet dream between two enemies. god i love your srories, please keep writing.

Is there a story you wrote to explain how their kids came to be?

Cute!

There are a few typos here and there. And one of my pet peeves is when people don't put some sort of dividing line between the story and the comments before it. It kinda makes it feel... disorganized.

Otherwise, though... tee hee... I really liked it. -

It could have been a bit more detailed... I think it has a lot of potential to be even better than this. Regardless, I like it. The family idea is interesting, and the story of how they eventually got together was really sweet. That could be a multi-chapter story, actually.

Overall, nice!

Eh I'm too lazy to sign in. I like your story but instead of 'a starving man who just found water' would it be 'a thirsty man who just found water'? I'm curious becuase I havn't heard of that before and it's rather interesting.

good job!

BACOOOOOON!

kya~~~3

Yay! Loved it! Dimitri and Zula sound like they are so cute. I swear to god, that if I were to see them lost or hurt I would take them to Dib and Zim in seconds. I would end up hugging them, I love toddlers. And I love animals. But alien-human babies top everything I have ever loved.

Awwwww this is such a lovely lil story me like it but not more then WAFFLES!

Ah, de beautiful fluffiness...very well done.