Great story! I love Davis!

want more!

Nice - hope there's more.

Love this.

It would be hilarious if the timeline change is what caused the Stargate program in the first place. (snorts) That incidentally is what may have caused the DoD's relaxation on time traveling protocols. Davis may be their out if they're ever discovered. They seriously should have asked Andy if such protocols existed BEFORE assuming defensive positions. In this case they're assuming the worst and then planning for it. It'd be cool if you exanded on that.

-jwchan -

This is very interesting! It flows easily and very believable.

What a wonderful read :)

Good and believable. I like it. Are you going to do a sequel?

cally

good beginning and a nice stand alone. Jedi if you continue this I hope LT COL Davis' other General gets to pay a visit. I think in your timeling Commander Homeworld Security Command would have an interest in the stuff going on at GD and in Eureka.

Awesome fic!