*cries*

That was so so so lovely!

First of all, happy birthday. Good to see something from you, and I definitely liked it. I have a couple of notes. First, the phrase "the further murderous Sirius Black was from them the less questions they would face." seemed a little awkwardly worded, and I think you want to say fewer questions, not less. Other than that, great job, and good luck with NaNoWriMo.

I love oneshots. I almost always want them to keep going, but at the same time I don't because they have a tendency to get soap opera-esque.

I like this. It's short and sweet and SWEET and sad and beautiful. Not too much and not too little. It's just right.

And happy birthday!

you're back!

YAYAYAAYA

fanfiction has not been the same without you ;(

will you be posting your NaNo on fictionpress or something? Want to read it xD

can't wait until there are more fics!

thanks

annie

I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

Thank you,

Terri