I just wanted to say that your perspective in this chapter is beautiful in its objectivity. I really admire this chapter and how you "treated" the subject matter discussed between Angela and Brennan: beautiful and eloquent in its clarity andnd, IMO, mature, respectful and a tribute to the relationships of all involved.

As soon as I read that she was singing the Keep on Tryin song, I began playing the song, which made the whole chapter so much more (and it was already a lot) powerful! I think its one of the best chapter I have ever read on Bones FF! Thanks !

i loved

Ok ive read ever chapter and have formed an opinion of this fic...the story is ok but a bit overly dramatic at times...also while i understand this is supposed to be very angsty, it also is very out of character..brennan is not such a train wreck and would never act in such ways you portray her...i mean attemptin murder is believable however i think you wording when writing makes the reader think she is crazy rather than hurt (i cant really feel her pain but more see her coo-coo ness.) jus work on you writing skill a bit more in terms of being over dramatic...if you go too far the story just seem really fake. Ps. I agree with u about hannah but i think you hold her a bit too high on a pedastool for her own good...she has a fierceness/attitude to her in he show but you make seem light a saint in you fic. Keep improving though :) -take this as encouargement however/constructive critisism and not me attackin your story. I think your a good promising writer thts why i did comment.

AWWW THAT WAS SO CUTE I LOVED IT PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!:)

Great chapter. You absolutely nailed writing Sweets, such a good job!

haha that last review was meant to say please update!

just found this story please review!

Excellent chapter, more than worth my time. Sweets' talk was so heart-felt.

Musie,

This was a WONDERFUL chapter, full of reality, heart and love. It's a great story that you're telling, and you are telling it with style and art.

I hope your own emotional wounds are healing. Thank you for providing entertainment for others despite your own issues.

So happy to see a new chapter! I think you captured sweets and brennan perfectly!

I thought it was good. I don't really think what happened was Sweet's fault because he didn't tell Booth what to say and certainly didn't tell him to say it was a gamble but I could see how he might think it was his fault. I am sorry about your aunt. I hope your exam went well.

I just read this whole story now...omg it's AMAZING!

You are a brilliant writer D

and yes, Brennan's face in the promo broke me :(

MORE!

Just found this...

I'm sorry I didn't comment on each chapter, but I couldn't stop reading. This is really fantastic. It's painful and full of angst, but beautiful and hopeful at the same time.