Continue please... I know it's been years but still pretty please? this is great!

More?

real Sammy apperes. I wonder to. What do u think Adam. Adams face shows up on the screen snoring
Zzzzzzzzzzzz. Sammy yells. WAKE UP ADAM! Adam wakes up scared out of his wits. Waahoopaquany
Rorollleyotafdzrcortoonjb translator apperes on screen. Translation (role the cartoon)

So when do u come in Sammy. Sammy apperes. Well u see I
He looks at the camera slash typer. No info for u viewers

They really should just make a movie on how Jimmy became Jimmy Two Shoes and how he ended up in a world full of monsters

Awww, thanks. I really like what you did with Heloise. Very ferocious. It's awesome that you're continuing with your story; even if you can't finish it, it's still extremely fun to read.

good, good... not bad for a return chapter.

I know I'm late in saying this, but I really wished you hadn't stopped. This looked like it would have been a great pilot story. I think you really captured the bleakness of Hell (Miseryville) and Lucifer's evilness.

Great story, when the next chapter.

I really liked the idea of a more dark and disturbing Jimmy Two-Shoes, and I was dissapointed when I heard that it would be like it currently is, but this fanfic is really good and I encourage you to write more. I would like to see what Helloise would be like in this universe (Even though I already know what she was supposed to be). Keep writing, and good luck.

Note:Samy is not a concept character

Heh. A bit short, but otherwise engaging.

The transfer scene was a bit confusing, but overall this is good stuff, with lots of potential. Please update!

YAY! It'z so awesome! X3