This is without a doubt a perfect and beautifully written piece. I could read it over and over and never tire of it. Your OC is amazing not over the top and over powered and not a pathetic victim. She is the perfect combination of strong and quirky. You also got Eliot down pat, too many people make him extreme and over exaggerate his characteristics. I also love the mixture of simplicity and complexity in this. Easy going plot yet all the emotions and the dynamics of their relationship is so over whelming I got tears in multiple chapters. This is a story that truly touched my heart and without a doubt can save love. I know some where these two are living happily ever after.

I've recently discovered Leverage and have fallen head over heels in love with Eliot, the ultimate badass and this was just perfect. He's definitely a badass but he has a vulnerable side that he doesn't really show and you've captured it perfectly. And Natalia is amazing. She's just the right blend of tough and softness. Definitely the perfect companion for Eliot.

Your writing is totally amazing and I can't wait to read more.

Loved every minute of it.

Great beginning! Immediately has the perfect tone and cadence of the characters. I could absolutely hear their voices.

Have you noticed that Christian Kane's song Permanent 99 fits this story perfectly?

Really great I loved it.

This was an AWESOME story! Am now looking for the sequel. :)

wonderful wonderful ending. fitting.

I smell sequel!

Really great and fun story. Bitter sweet, cause I want

Eliot to find love.

Thanks,

Mercedes

Sorry I didn't get the chance to review the last chapter

I am delighted to see 'sequel'. I love your writing and you create an amazing eliot for me. Can't count the number of times I have read this.

Well done..and thank you

Time to go wake hubby up for some midnight business :-D

Well worth the wait for this chapter.

Thanks,

Mercedes

*thud*

I read this for the first time when I woke up at 4 am this morning. I just reread it.

Another great update. You write wonderful sex scenes! and for that, I thank you. Provides a little excitement to my mundane little life.

So hot and fun. I love Eliot! Great story.

Thanks,

Mercedes

That was so cute!Great job at making Eliot gentle but still in character!

Loved it,update soon!