Hehehhehe.

Dan predicted his Pyrus Red colour and Shun's Ventus Green. /snickers/

And then their bakugan! YOU'RE A WIZARD DAN!

Oh my Gosh! That was absolutely hilarious! I really enjoyed this chapter. It continuously reminds me that I have abandoned my Sims Town on my phone. I wonder is it possible for them to die?

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0.0 lolz I'm laughing my axx off

Hahaha pe like the washroom lolz

For starters I would never do that to Shun-niisa that's just not right or nice at all.

this was a really good story but what about the halloween stories you said you would post

this was strange on many levels why did shun act so weird

givin how he knew he would see runo again and he knew he and shun would have a dragon and a phonix to help them fight im starting to think hs phychic

Great story, I wish some of the chapters could've been longer, but it was great none the less.

Loved this! so well planned and portrayed! :)

i would be scared of my reflection too if i was dan lol

nice story i'll keep readinggg

I LUUUUV IT! who wouldnt?

wow nice work on that story! I did lisen to sympathy on my ds and it work so well, it was made for it! so thanks I loved it.. -Leocrystal

OM this is too cute! How have I not read this before! I'm totally in love with this... I love kiddie!Dan and Kiddie!Shun playing Pokemon, what an adorable image... though I always figured Dan would've picked a Chikorita...

it's fun to see what Pokemon characters from other anime series would've picked!

anyway, i don't think you portrayed them too OOC at all, considering they're kids. gah, it's just too cute! anyway, ill read more when i have time!