Reviews for Carmine Sun |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Muy buena historia, quizás deberías de hacer un epilogo para que tenga un sierre |
![]() ![]() ![]() really good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it... I usually like when the author explore the building love between Bella and Alice rather the drama and action... but your story was able to make me cry... So I have to take my hat off for you... great job... tks |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an okay story. Not what I thought it was going to be when I read the summary but okay just the same. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was good!I wonder if you gonna make a sequel!Will you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() no i think alice needs a hug to. as for edward being the villain, i dont care. edward/bella can stay in the books and movie's. here on this fanfiction site i like alice/bella better |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well. I'm glad that Jasper can have a happy life with Leah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my gosh i got so emotional reading this! i like no joke started crying! i love how you made the werewolves and the vampires friends that's awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It doesnt make sense that the Volturi would punish Alice for killing Edward. If they had a law about killing other vampires, they would have been obligated to help Victoria kill the Cullens for the murder of her mate. After all, James was only trying to kill a human, not a vampire. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not too sweet but stupid, Eddy would not have thought about her once she was ashes, these type of people are not to be admired. Forgiving their enemies just tend to make them a target over and over. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() The only thing I can say right now... ...!FANFUCKINGTASTIC!... This was he'll of a chapter, please don't torture us and update soon. Amazing writing and loved the effects I got from all the characters feelings. Have an amazing week and I will be hoping for a new chap this week ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey. 'YaY' You didn't kill Alice, thank you for that. Loved the chapter and I look forward to reading what you write next. Thanks for writting. Sincerely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how this is a different story to everyone elses, how you made Edward a bad guy instead of the magical, flawless, none controlling person people believe he is. I like how the Volturi finally got what was coming for them, even though I can't believe Aro is dead! Good job on this story :) |