Reviews for Carmine Sun
merniizztat chapter 13 . 5/13/2017
;)
milagglad chapter 13 . 8/20/2014
Muy buena historia, quizás deberías de hacer un epilogo para que tenga un sierre
AliceCullen0629 chapter 13 . 6/22/2011
really good story
Bela23 chapter 13 . 4/27/2011
Love it... I usually like when the author explore the building love between Bella and Alice rather the drama and action... but your story was able to make me cry... So I have to take my hat off for you... great job... tks
DerekStJohn chapter 13 . 4/24/2011
This was an okay story. Not what I thought it was going to be when I read the summary but okay just the same. :D
samaramorgane chapter 13 . 9/8/2010
It was good!I wonder if you gonna make a sequel!Will you?
lightskiller chapter 6 . 8/25/2010
no i think alice needs a hug to. as for edward being the villain, i dont care. edward/bella can stay in the books and movie's. here on this fanfiction site i like alice/bella better
lynettecullen chapter 13 . 8/25/2010
Well.

I'm glad that Jasper can have a happy life with Leah.
absolutelyaddictedtofanfics chapter 13 . 8/25/2010
oh my gosh i got so emotional reading this! i like no joke started crying! i love how you made the werewolves and the vampires friends that's awesome!
Avanwolf chapter 9 . 8/25/2010
It doesnt make sense that the Volturi would punish Alice for killing Edward. If they had a law about killing other vampires, they would have been obligated to help Victoria kill the Cullens for the murder of her mate. After all, James was only trying to kill a human, not a vampire.
ShadowCub chapter 13 . 8/25/2010
Not too sweet but stupid, Eddy would not have

thought about her once she was ashes, these type

of people are not to be admired.

Forgiving their enemies just tend to make them

a target over and over.
The Queen's Saviour chapter 13 . 8/25/2010
Awesome! :D
AEONVAR chapter 12 . 8/23/2010
The only thing I can say right now...

...!FANFUCKINGTASTIC!...

This was he'll of a chapter, please don't torture us and update soon. Amazing writing and loved the effects I got from all the characters feelings. Have an amazing week and I will be hoping for a new chap this week ]
Shiver Pixie chapter 12 . 8/22/2010
Hey.

'YaY' You didn't kill Alice, thank you for that. Loved the chapter and I look forward to reading what you write next. Thanks for writting.

Sincerely.
BeckyConda chapter 12 . 8/22/2010
I love how this is a different story to everyone elses, how you made Edward a bad guy instead of the magical, flawless, none controlling person people believe he is. I like how the Volturi finally got what was coming for them, even though I can't believe Aro is dead! Good job on this story :)
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