Such a beautiful story :)..though misty became a mother at such an early age I really admire her courage as it's such a tough n crucial decision to make,she is really brave :)..amazing work!

Tell me there will be more chapters please I need an update please

I can't wait for her to finally have the babies so Ash can appear again lol

You don't like Dawn a lot, do you? XD
But damnit, Ash has some serious explaining to do. Why'd he confess his feelings to Misty and then start dating Dawn? THAT IS HORRIBLE.

Pokeshipping?
More like Imageshipping (Misty and May) lol
The fanfic is great, but I wish it had more actual pokeshipping or at least show Ash's POV a little.
I really like how May and Misty are like sisters though.

PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THE STORY!
And I love it!

Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Wtf wow

In this chapter you say that Misty lets out her Gyarados, Azurill, Politoad, Corsola, Staryu, Goldeen, and Dewgon. But that's a problem since a Trainer is only allowed to carry 6 Pokemon on them at any given time and if you count how many you listed you'll find you had Misty carrying 7 in total. Meaning technically one of the PokeBalls shouldn't have even enlarged and don't say it's because Azurill is a baby and isn't in a PokeBall because, no matter how you try to validate it, the fact is Misty had 7 Pokemon on her at the time and that isn't allowed at all. other than that so far the story is good.

Also what ever happened to that story you were talking about a few chapters ago it sounded like it was going to be an awesome one and I hope you plan on releasing it still it was a rewrite of a story I'm guessing you released before called Beyond Destiny.

Great story and interesting to see how Misty went through all of that, although if I was Ash I'd be pretty mad about not being told about my children. Even tho for the most part Misty did it for good reasons but that really should of been Ash's decision (also Brock gets ripped and missing the chance to be a god parent to them as well), although I'm sure he'll move past it so he can be a part of his children's lives. I wonder what her sisters reaction would be I'd imagine mostly relief and happiness but that's a pretty bad thing to put your family through, just to go missing for 2 years.

Until the sequel which I'll start reading right now.

OMG I LOVED this story! I'll read the sequel tomorrow! :D Loved it SOOOOOO much!

This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.

Nice! Wow, good work. I like the way you told the story... but why do I get the feeling Ash and Dawn aren't together either? Well done.

Good story, kinda depressing. Sadly, this reminds me a little of another story I read that was also quite depressing, due to the semi similar situations. This is an overall good read though. I'll be looking forward to you finishing the second story.