Yeah... this is still one of the best ncis fics I've read. It's been almost 10 years since thr first time I read it and I still sticks with me. Just amazing.

I really enjoyed this one. You're an excellent storyteller!

i loved this story, absolutely wonderful :) Shellie Williams you are one of my favorites.

Aw, great story. I really liked Vernon and Mansfield, and great ending scene with Tim and Tony.

Wow! So much action Great Bromance story, really liked it

Oh this is good. I loved it.

dragonlover44

Hey, I would just like to point out that there is a mistake in the fourth paragraph and the third line that begins 'Black night..' ,the mistake was not putting 'Black night had come and stolen away the sun's light.' but that was the only mistake I found.

Hi, I read it all this morning. Good story. Thanks, Tracy

Awe. This was a wonderful ending. I'm not sure what else to say, except that I loved it. I know that doesn't do this review justice, though... sorry. Loved it, though, really. Thanks for writing it. I'll try to check out more from you ASAP. :)

Renthead07

Hehe. I like Vernon. XD Him taking down his old fence by backing over it with his car was hilarious.

I hope my Timmy makes it! Loving this story so far.

Renthead07

Ohhh! I only wish I didn't have class tomorrow, so I could stay up later and read more of this! Alas, it will have to wait. What a cliffhanger, though! Great job! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Renthead07

I apologize for not reviewing before now, but I was so engaged in the story, I just wanted to read and absorb. I'm loving it so far.

"We operate."

Oooooooh! That last line's intensity killed me!

Can't wait to see what's next! Hope McGee is OK! He's my favorite character after Tony, maybe before. I love him. A lot.

Off to read more!

Renthead07

Another really good story! This one kept ahold of the reader in the tightest grip and wouldn't let go until the end.

That is what makes a great story!

Thanks.

This story is freakin amazing. I love your writing!

Aw I love it.