Reviews for Breathe
Kaycomee chapter 19 . 12/17/2016
I am conflicted. If this is or even isn't complete, it's an amazing story. I would love to see more but for now its a nice stopping point, which is why I'm not entirely sure if it's finished or not. Two thumbs up from me.
Melondelights chapter 19 . 4/7/2016
I Cant Believe I Just Discovered This Two Days ago. Love it
denebtenoh chapter 19 . 7/17/2015
awwwww!
dreamfall07 chapter 19 . 7/15/2015
Hi there

I really like your story! I also read the first one Closer and the moments between Lightning and Fang are really nice.
Keep up the good work and I hope to see another chapter soon! ;)

Have a nice day!
denebtenoh chapter 5 . 7/11/2015
Ooohh! i just adore the idea of a story where Lightning has Serah tagging along in the journey! even if its brief and an illusion. Great!
Wish B chapter 19 . 7/10/2015
That was quite a departure from the norm aha. Looking forward to more!
Versace.In.My.Trap.House chapter 19 . 6/14/2015
Awwwwwh!
Cormag Ravenstaff chapter 18 . 5/24/2015
This is a fun story! I've enjoyed these past few days of reading it and Closer. The only thing I have to complain about is the real lack of romance. You can have romance move slowly (Like you seem to want it to happen) while still having it there. Just keep that in mind
play.read.write chapter 18 . 5/18/2015
Went back and reread the whole thing to remember what happened. Great story, glad to see an update. Really enjoying the interaction between the characters, Light and Fang especially, but all of the others too. And ofc, can't go wrong with puns, lol. Hope to see more soon.
Wish B chapter 18 . 5/16/2015
I didn't expect a chapter so soon! Definitely have to go back and reread everything now.
Versace.In.My.Trap.House chapter 18 . 5/13/2015
Omfg yaaaassss, I've been waiting forever
Guest chapter 17 . 5/15/2014
Are you ever going to continue this?
Guest chapter 17 . 4/23/2014
Aw what a clif hanger still waiting for the next update! Lol poor lighting Dx and Fang wrist ouch _
Versace.In.My.Trap.House chapter 16 . 2/10/2014
I would tell you to update soon, but this hasn't been updated since 2011, so I'd just be wasting my time. .-. Instead, I'm going to say that this story is amazing and I hope that some time in the future you'll continue it. Very interested in the whole Snow/Lightning/Fang triangle
HyperOps chapter 17 . 2/3/2014
Yeah...I don't know if you're planning on continuing this story but just wanted to let you know that you still have one person who constantly checks to see if this story is updated! :)
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