:D

I'm just thinking of the ending, and all those dirty tricks Sora pulls in KH II. It's hilarious.

Great!

Really great!

You wrote Vanitas really well here! This might explain how Sora gets a keyblade.

When Sora feels something stir inside himself, is it always Vanitas or is it sometimes Ventus? It'd be interesting to see how those two get along.

Aww, I'm picturing this so perfectly inside my head! Little Sora and Riku are so cute! ;W; But I have to admit little Sora and big Vanitas...creepy. DX Very good story, though!~

its good and it surprised me.

I knew Sora and Vanitas were opposites, but this fic just showed me how much.

aww y does everyone hate on vanitas!

Great oneshot! Sora's tantrum was soooo typically bratty of a little kid but in the adorable way! And Vanitas is such a jerk-face! How DARE he do that to poor Sora! I swear in Kingdom Hearts 3 Vanitas should be resurrected just to see Sora's reaction!

Wow! I like how Sora sounds just as young as he should. How DOES Vanitas know that stuff about Sora? His connection to Sora goes through Ventus, and is probably a one-way street. That's some pretty personal info to fish out of a link that's only skin-deep.

very nice

This oneshot is excellent, the internal dialogue of Sora and Vanitas's mannerisms are well written and I love the move Sora used against Riku and the following reactions. If it's alright, I would like to use the move in my own writing... With your permission... All in all, an fantastic fic. *applause*

Dang looking from the date I'm really late. Sorry been very busy. Also thanks you did perfectly. I wonder what vanitas talking about at the end. I love it when right him because you perfectly characterise him. Thank you again.

And here I'm dying to know what Vanitas means at the end...

Good job on this one.

Interesting again, Wolfe. Have I read you other work? Never mind.

Those two are very different. Could you possibly...Well, you are going to write a Namitas fic, so I shouldn't ask.